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20th Nov 2015 14:25 - 9 years ago
Description : Here is a new song I recorded in my new studio. I played the electric guitars, acoustic guitar, bass, resonator, and sang the vocals, the drums are from Ez drummer. A few EQ issues in the bass department, I plan eventually fixing those as time passes. If you like the song feel free to download it.

Comments (15)

If you have time take a listen and give ImproveWithError some feedback.

clindsay
clindsay 6th Dec 2015 23:43 - 9 years ago
Nice - has a Ry Cooder vibe with the slide guitar. Very good pacing - like the way it flows without forcing the tempo. well done.
-clindsay
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 6th Dec 2015 20:27 - 9 years ago
Wow! I just came across this! I really dig the loosiness of the track. Feels raw, real. That bass provides a lot of punch and drives the heaviness into the song. Great work, always lovin' your stuff :) Btw, your mixing is improving!

Brado
Ben1972
Ben1972 6th Dec 2015 10:26 - 9 years ago
real good, reminds me on a tarantino movie soundtrack :-)
Ben
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 7th Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks man, I get what you are saying!!

Kyle
Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 6th Dec 2015 03:29 - 9 years ago
In my opinion this is the best stuff. Raw, live human performances, imperfections only add to the beauty of it. My brother has been doing alot like this,(bluesdaddy80) just jamming on his acoustic and singing away. Very cool :D
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 7th Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey,

Thanks for checking out the track, I appreciate your comments. I am glad you liked the track, thanks again.

Kyle
JasonCroft
JasonCroft 25th Nov 2015 21:20 - 9 years ago
Dont think like this man
who doesnt hate his voice?
its normal, cuz everyone think their voice are so bad
and they hate their voice
and I truely say
I liked your vocie
and I think your voice is beautiful
Kindest regards
J_*
JasonCroft
JasonCroft 23rd Nov 2015 08:32 - 9 years ago
Greetings
the song is great and...
are you the singer of this song?
Kind regards
J_*
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 25th Nov 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey, thanks for taking the time to listen to the track. I am the singer, I write, play, and sing everything on my tracks. I wish I was a better singer, but at least I can some what sing in tune 50% of time :). Thanks again.

Kyle
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 23rd Nov 2015 03:50 - 9 years ago
I`m diggin this one big time Kyle...it has a nice loose live feel...and I think that comes from just playing & singing the way you do....actually the production is pretty well done...(I`m listening on my studio headphones ..ATM-M50s)...nice job on the lyrics...I like the deep bass (I go for it often) so don`t tame it too much..You have a style I always enjoy.....well done...hope all is well down your way....Ed
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 25th Nov 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey Ed, everything is good my way, just way more busy than I would like to be. Thanks for checking out the track and thanks for comments, they are always appreciated.

Kyle
Deathbot
Deathbot 21st Nov 2015 02:32 - 9 years ago
Hi, its great to hear some slide guitar on here.
I only listened to your song with my laptop speakers so no critique from me.
I feel like playing some slide myself now.
Cheers
DB
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 21st Nov 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks, I appreciate you stopping by a taking a listen.

Kyle
MOONLYTE
MOONLYTE 21st Nov 2015 01:30 - 9 years ago
Sound pretty good, tho vocals are flat in some areas. Production wis every good as well
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 21st Nov 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks for taking the time to listen, I appreciate it. I didn't put the pro touch on the vocals to manually pitch correct them, but maybe some day :) I have a heck of a time trying to sing with headphones on.
promenade2239
promenade2239 20th Nov 2015 21:33 - 9 years ago
hello again

I had a chance to listen on better system and I really liked the overall message and your vision.

However, my observation and complain is that there is no realistic separation between instruments (regarding to the arrangement and the actual placing the layers/players within a composition). This happened to me many times when making everything myself so do not worry.
For example: there are uncontrolled frequencies coming from the bass guitar clashing with other layers - especially with middle frequency range of the electric 'rhythm guitar' section. So as a result it sounds as if there were at least 2 different chord progressions played simultaneously but in fact those are only 4 simple chords basically.

Just my opinion. Not sure if the problem is in actual playing or mixing. Maybe both or somewhere in between.

Apart of all that the vocals are cool and I truly appreciate the work you did with songwriting as well as the fact that you performed and mixed everything alone. Didgeridoo teaser was nice as well as stereo illusion on it and I really liked all slide guitar additions throughout.

Greetings, Alex
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 20th Nov 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey,
I know what you are saying, I am hearing the clash on certain speakers that I have played this on. I will eventually go back and try to fix it after I have gave my ears a break from the track for awhile. Thanks for checking out the track.

Kyle
traz75
traz75 20th Nov 2015 20:47 - 9 years ago
Nice one! The resonating bass is a really killer one! :)
Btw, thanks for the quality loops you uploaded until now too!

regards, traz
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 20th Nov 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey traz, no problem with the loops, I hope to have some time soon to create some new ones as well. The bass is a bit heavy, I plan on eventually going back and taming it down a little.

Kyle
promenade2239
promenade2239 20th Nov 2015 19:39 - 9 years ago
hello

this is very fine and very bluesy. I am listening on poor laptop speakers now so there is not much to say in details.
I really liked what you did with EZ patterns - the slow tempo off beat sort of drumming works nicely. Interesting that you have both acoustic and electric guitars within the same composition - it is quite unusual but it really seem to work. I am going to download your song and will take a listen again later on headphones.

Congratulations on songwriting and production.
Alex
Orlando51
Orlando51 20th Nov 2015 18:40 - 9 years ago
Great recording and production ! The overall feel reminds me alot on REM's song "Drive! ! Excellent!

Compliments______Orlando
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 20th Nov 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey Orlando, thanks for listening and the download, glad you liked it that much.

Kyle
RichieWinn
RichieWinn 20th Nov 2015 18:31 - 9 years ago
Hi

Such a lazy feel this - it works very well. Love your vocals and the additonal harmonies. Nice slide acoustic too. Great track. Love it.

Richie
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 20th Nov 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks for checking out the track Richie, I tuned the guitars a full step down to try to give a bit of a "swampy" feel to it.

Kyle
Danke
Danke 20th Nov 2015 15:23 - 9 years ago
Super slow western acoustic rock with those stunning choruses...first 35 seconds I thought it would be a Bon Jovi cover but fortunatelly not...:-)

Great track Kyle, hats off and handshake, Danke
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 20th Nov 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey thanks for checking out the track danke, I am glad you liked it enough to download it!!

Kyle

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