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17th Dec 2015 16:45 - 9 years ago
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Description : Here is a new song I wrote, I wanted to keep this one simple and raw, vocals and acoustic recorded in one take. I played and sang all the parts, I eventually plan on rerecording this and adding to it. If you like the track feel free to download it.

Kyle

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If you have time take a listen and give ImproveWithError some feedback.

theHumps
theHumps 21st Dec 2015 17:15 - 9 years ago
Merry Christmas Kyle! Sounds great, mix is your best yet. The vocals are out front and the acoustic tracks are set just right supporting the vox. It has a little feel of the Allman Bros. thrown in there. The recording of the acoustic guitars sounds live, recorded through a mic. It will be cool to see where you take this and how much you add.

Cheers!

Wayne
DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein 19th Dec 2015 14:24 - 9 years ago
I like your singing a lot. I can understand all the words! Is that a steel guitar you use for some bits of countermelody here and there (I heard a bit of sliding)? Nice work. Good luck with further development.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 20th Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey,

The slide guitar is actually my Telecaster with a little chorus, and a whole lot of reverb going into a Fender tweed amp. I usually use Pod Farm, or Waves GTR3 for my guitar sounds, I don't have the space for amp. Both sound pretty good and are easy to tweak. Thanks for listening and commenting, I appreciate it.

Kyle
crucethus
crucethus 19th Dec 2015 02:51 - 9 years ago
not a fan of new country, but that being said I love classic country, blues, bluegrass and this sort of mudbone sound that just reeks of attitude and hubris. Awesome work and I can't wait to hear the developed product.
Cru
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 20th Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey thanks for listening and commenting, I love all types of country, I prefer the early 2000's and before but none the less the new stuff is ok...a little too poppy at times though. Whenever I try to write country songs, I like to try combine the older stuff with my own style...for better or worst. Anyway, I am glad you liked the track and I appreciate you taking the time to listen.

Kyle
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 19th Dec 2015 01:59 - 9 years ago
This is probably the most traditional Country song I have heard you do Kyle...and you have done an exceptional job of it....its got the story,,...perfect accompaniment (dont add too much to it...but I can hear the room some some strings and maybe a more prominent bass part)..I guess the Loop doesn`t have a lot of country...but this is just a good song, exceptionally well done in any genre..a tip of the hat to you....Check out a site called SongRamp..a lot of country & gospel music and an active songwriters forum...I posted a couple of my instrumental tunes on their free version a while back but realized that aside from the friendships it was not really the place for an old instrumental guy...You have a good song going Kyle and its worth doing whatever you can to take it to the level you want and getting it out there...It would fit right in the "Country" charts....great job...keep on....Ed
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 20th Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey Ed,

Thanks for the kind words, I agree with you on keeping the song simple and not adding too much to it. I am going to check out the website as well, after writing the song I have a couple artist in mind that would really sound awesome singing this song. One of them is a relatively unknown artist who has actually wrote a couple of songs that were cut by some big names in the industry. I may try to pitch the song to him, not sure how do that but I think its worth a try to figure out. Thanks again for the listen and review.

Kyle

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