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3rd Feb 2016 20:57 - 9 years ago
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Description : A new song that I wrote, I played all the instruments and sang, the drums are from EZ drummer. The track is kind of a cross genre rock track. If you like it feel free to download. Thanks for listening.

Kyle

Comments (10)

If you have time take a listen and give ImproveWithError some feedback.

midiman007
midiman007 12th Apr 2016 19:45 - 8 years ago
Nice track.. Very impressed.
crucethus
crucethus 9th Feb 2016 22:57 - 8 years ago
Not a huge fan of country rock, but I am truly impressed with the sound quality you achieved in this recording. The guitars sound awesome. nice work
Cru
mildperil
mildperil 7th Feb 2016 22:20 - 8 years ago
Another excellent song, so professional sounding as well.
GregVincey
GregVincey 6th Feb 2016 12:45 - 8 years ago
Yo my man, this is good music. Am rocking out to these lyrics man, i love it:)
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 6th Feb 2016 - 8 years ago
Hey Greg thanks for checking out the track, I am glad you like it.

Kyle
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 5th Feb 2016 11:55 - 9 years ago
Acoustic greetings.

The very first thing that struck me about this is the quality of your acoustic guitar recording. Lovely, warm totally pro sound. I'd like to have that sort of sound but don't have a proper acoustic. Two resonators but no proper acoustic.

Some of the guitar playing is a nice combination of somewhat funky and I feel that I can hear the details of your fingers strumming. What a difference a great recording of an instrument makes.

Song is pretty solid but nothing special to my ears. It does sound like radio music. The changes all work just fine.

Bass does a really good supporting job.

1:10 maybe that electric guitar solo could be a bit louder as the acoustic is still dominating. Maybe that's how you want it.

Congrats on a really good production. Doesn't really matter if I'm not that into the songwriting style. I'm sure others are.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 5th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Hey Static thanks for the input, I agree that the solo needs to come up a little, I will get to that here soon. I appreciate the compliments on the production, I have really been trying to focus on my production skills, so it must be paying off. Anyway, thanks again for the listen and the feedback, I appreciate it.

Kyle
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 5th Feb 2016 05:35 - 9 years ago
Dang! I'm really blown away by this one! You've come a heck of a long way in the past year! This one sounds so much better production-wise than some of your old stuff. Your voice in particular sounds much more professional. The only thing I notice is a lack of bass presence, but besides that, the mix is great and everything sounds wide and clear. Great work and epic improvement!

Brado
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 5th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Thanks Brado, I have really tried to concentrate on the production side of my track. I used to just record and move a few faders and be done, now I actually try to eq things, add compression and what not. I am glad you are hearing a difference, I must actually be learning something :), anyway thanks for stopping by and having a listen.

Kyle
Evisma
Evisma 5th Feb 2016 02:38 - 9 years ago
Greetings, Mr. Error.

Not my kind of Rock, a country fusion sound, but your voice instantly reminded me of Dylan and his son. Don't hear many decent singers on here. It was good to hear your vocals.

Guitars are pretty minimal. Simple structure, but it sounded like something you'd hear on the radio. I don't think you were going for originality, but it sounds good without having to be complicated.

Take care

Evan
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 5th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Hey Evan, I appreciate the vocal complement, I wish I were a better singer but I have come to except what I have. This song started on accident really, I was trying to find some guitar tones that I liked and then I ended up writing this while messing around, a normal process I guess. Thanks for listening, I appreciate it.

Kyle
adamms
adamms 4th Feb 2016 15:11 - 9 years ago
great job and great song. I love all the guitar tracks that you got layered in. but in parts I feel they guitars tracks volume are to high. like the solo at 3:02 was very cool but volume to low and got over whelmed by the other guitar tracks. good job sorry trying not to sound so critical.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 5th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Hey adamms, thanks for listening and the download. I agree that the guitar solo is a bit hard to hear. I will try to fix that soon and then update the track. Thanks again

Kyle
traz75
traz75 3rd Feb 2016 22:53 - 9 years ago
Nice one!
Against your profile's text, i think you have enough nice vocal. At least i can imagine this track on most local (hungarian) radio stations. There's tons of a lot worse singers, lol.

regards, traz
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 5th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Hey traz thanks for taking a listen to the track, I really appreciate the compliments.

Kyle
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 3rd Feb 2016 22:44 - 9 years ago
Very tasty accompaniment with just the right amount of embellishment bits to compliment the basic rhythm parts...as always, you do a fine job on the lyrics Kyle & deliver them with that cool vocal character you have...really enjoyed this one...great job...Ed
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 5th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Thanks Ed, I appreciate your feedback as always. I am finally starting to get some more time to write and record more, so hopefully I can do at least one track per month. I have really been trying to concentrate on learning to mix and master my tracks better, which I think is one of the funnest aspects of the whole songwriting process. Thanks again for listening.

Kyle

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