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13th Feb 2016 15:38 - 9 years ago
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Description : So I had a guitar lick for years that I never did anything with. I was going to try to write a country song with it, instead it turned into kind of retro rock track. I am pretty happy with the end result, I think it turned out better than my initial idea. I sang and played all of the instruments on the track. The drums are from Ez Drummer, which is awesome in my opinion. Thanks for listening, if you like the track please feel free to download.

Kyle

Comments (11)

If you have time take a listen and give ImproveWithError some feedback.

BlancFroid
BlancFroid 6th Oct 2017 03:09 - 7 years ago
Just straight-up happenin'!
topvega
topvega 5th Oct 2017 23:28 - 7 years ago
Sounds great. Has a Dandy Warhol vibe at the beginning for me. Then the vocals kick in and it sounds more Country Rock. Vocals were solid. I would like a more prominent bassline but that is just nitpicking.
Overall great track. Nice job.

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traz75
traz75 14th Nov 2016 16:19 - 8 years ago
Hi!

No miss. Hit. :)
Nice job, i love your guitarplay.
Regards, traz
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 19th Feb 2016 16:56 - 9 years ago
Oh yeah...that guitar lick does stick in the head...classic kind of rock lick I recall well from days gone by...I really like this one Kyle..Your vocal is, as always, top notch and I definitely like that country-rock accompaniment you`ve got going...I`m just using some old Sony MDV600 cans & they are terrible on the low end (great for checking highs) so the bass sounds fine...if you need to unmuddy it a bit just try scooping our between 200-400 and bump it a tiny bit at 80...great track Kyle...rea;;y did enjoy it....Ed.
Evisma
Evisma 16th Feb 2016 03:45 - 9 years ago
Greetings.

Voice always reminds me of Dylan. Second vocal in the break is pretty cool.

I'm not a fan of the lower stuff on the left. Would sound a bit better centered a bit more.

Not a lot to really say in terms of criticism! More of an intro and outro, but I liked it and the drums had a good sound, though I'd add a bit more hat in the verses.

I do dig it!

Evan
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 17th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Hey Evan thanks for checking out the track and commenting.
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 15th Feb 2016 00:34 - 9 years ago
Noting, Static's point at :15 Are there toms playing along side the bass? Might be the cause for muddle.

DANG DUDE. Your stuff has spiked sharply in quality. No joke. You're getting closer and closer to radio quality. Such a massive (and pleasant) difference from your older work! Towards the later part of the song, it feels a bit unbalanced in volumes on the left and right sides, at least to my ears. Overall, A+ for your improvement! Keep it up. You're seriously improving by leaps and bounds!

Brado
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 15th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Hey Brado,

Thanks for the compliments, I think I enjoy the mixing and mastering stage of the recording process the most now that I am trying to get better at it. I noticed that muddle as well, I mixed this song completely on my Sony MDR 7506's, I haven't has chance to listen on my monitors yet, I keep them in the studio that I put in at my school. I am having trouble finding the right eq move on those headphones since they are not overly bass heavy. Thanks again, I appreciate it immensely.
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 14th Feb 2016 21:11 - 9 years ago
Rocky greetings.

I probably told you that I have most of the EZ kits. I think I recognise this one. Is it the one just called Rock? I tend to forget their names when I'm working with them.

Anyway, your opening lead guitar has some pretty decent bends in it. A bit country for sure.

0:15 there seems a bit of a problem with the bass. It seems too subby and interferes with the rest of the track. Have you just got bass guitar there? Definitely something muddy about the low end.

Song is really quite catchy and fun. Drums are effective and well suited to the genre. Decent fills and switches from hat to ride.

Mix seems pretty good. Powerful but not painfully loud.

My main production criticism is regarding the low end. Oh, and the ending, which is very inconclusive and also cuts off abruptly.

Otherwise, congrats on some good work.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 15th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
I noticed that muddle as well, I mixed this song completely on my Sony MDR 7506's, I haven't had a chance to listen on my monitors yet, I keep them in the studio that I put in at my school. I am having trouble finding the right eq move on those headphones since they are not overly bass heavy. I need to go back and re-fade that ending as well, it was not as smooth as I wanted, I adjusted some sections of the track and it must have messed with that fade not being turned down all the way.
lechina
lechina 14th Feb 2016 20:40 - 9 years ago
very nice track.The vocals are splendidly done and agrees with the instruments.Anyway good song i liked it.keep up the good work
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 18th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Thanks for listening to the track and taking the time to comment, I appreciate it.

Kyle
MGproduct
MGproduct 14th Feb 2016 02:43 - 9 years ago
Excellent ... but what is the cause you elect this name ? :)
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 14th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Hey thanks for stopping by to listen and comment. This is a song I wrote for my wife, the little miss was just a catchy sounding phrase that worked for the melody and flow of the song.

Kyle
Pixxlexia
Pixxlexia 13th Feb 2016 23:46 - 9 years ago
this type of track takes me to the 70's, It was picture perfect for that time, but music perfect.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 14th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Hey thanks for stopping by and listening, I appreciate the comment as well. This was a fun track to make, it exceeded my expectations.

Kyle
Danke
Danke 13th Feb 2016 18:50 - 9 years ago
Great, uplifting, easy listening track Kyle!

It'll be perfect for my car cd...:-)

Handshake, Danke
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError replied 14th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Hey Danke,

Thanks for the listen and the download, I am glad you are going to listen to it on the go. :)

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