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7th Jun 2016 05:17 - 8 years ago
Description : Too many emotions, no better way than to make a track about them.
On a side note, I feel like Looperman is dying out :/ Seems like there are not that many active listeners anymore...

Comments (14)

If you have time take a listen and give 7venth12 some feedback.

xtrac
xtrac 16th Sep 2016 06:38 - 8 years ago
this is so fucking sick. wow great fucking track
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 11th Jun 2016 22:06 - 8 years ago
Dang man, this track is so good. It's a bit too compressed though, you're losing clarity on some of the percussion (shakers and such) because it is pressed so hard. But the vocal and the instrumental are flawless. It's extremely catchy, why are you still here when you could be getting big? :)

Brado
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 11th Jun 2016 11:38 - 8 years ago
Hi.

Yes, not that many active commenters here and very few decent, interesting ones. But there are still a few.

These vocals are pure pop music to me so not at all what I'm into. It's a good voice and the kind that people love, I understand that.

0:32 reverbed bongo type of hits are a surprise and work quite well.

0:52 good movement of pads. Arps, perhaps. Then a fat kick as this builds with a good, melodic new lead.

Then the drums drop out pretty much where I thought they might kick into a firmer groove. Then a long build again, with those high vocals on top. Then things get a bit steadier in terms of groove and more exciting before coming back down for the end.

This is chilled out but also quite loud and powerful. Perhaps too loud (on the master) but I know that's popular in this sort of style. Makes me think of some sort of emotional, chillout dubstep.

Sorry if I didn't have much interesting stuff to say but I did try.

Congrats on some decent work though it's not my kind of style.
25DjTj
25DjTj 11th Jun 2016 09:08 - 8 years ago
Almost good track...liked the way you didn't use the conventional 4-beat kick rhythm. The bass goes in well too.
You know,just a wee bit of mastering needed here and there (volume normalization perhaps)
Thank you
TJ
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 9th Jun 2016 16:40 - 8 years ago
Very interesting style of song here. Has a very pop vibe to it, which is not what I would usually listen to. All the same, I do dig the composition and arrangement. I found the mix/master to be extremely loud and harsh, especially for this sort of "emotional" song. I had just listened to one of my songs in order to reply to a comment well... then I started your song, and I had to to lower the volume on my speakers so that they were nearly off. This is a bad sign. You want the listener to be able to adjust the volume on their own. There is some clipping present in the song, and I would back of on any compression and limiting thresholds/gain. Good work on the composition though for sure. Don't be discouraged about Looperman, just keep doing your thing here, and people will come around.
mildperil
mildperil 8th Jun 2016 16:37 - 8 years ago
Excellent sound, and quite original too. Or am I just a bit behind the times? Probably :)

Thanks for sharing.
GregVincey
GregVincey 8th Jun 2016 10:30 - 8 years ago
You are getting good at this future bass sound bro! Did you designed the sounds or is it presets?

Just maybe, it gets boring here, I don't know lol
BentonMcKenzie
BentonMcKenzie 8th Jun 2016 02:38 - 8 years ago
I thought this track was beautiful. Love the arrangement. I'm going to guess either Dm or Gm. Keep up the good work.
7venth12
7venth12 replied 8th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thank you for the compliment, and Bm is the key ;)
crucethus
crucethus 8th Jun 2016 02:34 - 8 years ago
Nice use of vocals and very chill. enjoyable.
cru
7venth12
7venth12 replied 8th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks for stopping by :)
KnightHeir
KnightHeir 7th Jun 2016 18:10 - 8 years ago
(Something I wrote to this beat)

.optimistic - not un-real-istic
.a mystic
.re-al-ist

.we in this - journey to please
.so lets be honest - i - want - my peeps to be free
.the sequel to see - is = to 3...

Great work! I wrote a few bars out of respect but I could just as easily listen to this and just reminisce. Keep em coming 7venth12.
7venth12
7venth12 replied 8th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Nice lyrics :) Thanks for sharing your creative input and for the listen!
ZeeHipHop
ZeeHipHop 7th Jun 2016 09:23 - 8 years ago
Another gem. Great mix man
7venth12
7venth12 replied 8th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thank you Zee!!
smallpaul
smallpaul 7th Jun 2016 08:02 - 8 years ago
What a beautiful chilled out track you have here. Laid back and really easy on the ear! How did you put it together was it a vocal sample worked round a tune or someone singing over the track? Excellent work here anyway. Very well done!
7venth12
7venth12 replied 8th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
A lot of my vocals, such as this one come from here http://freevocals.com/ and this singer's vocals just seemed to fit the early construction of the track so I decided to fit it in. Thanks for the listen, glad you enjoyed it!
PapaNelson
PapaNelson 7th Jun 2016 07:34 - 8 years ago
You were definitely correct about the emotion part. Definitely got me feeling haha! Great track, honestly love he samplework. And it fits just right with the synth! I'm jealous :D Samplework is still a weak point for me. But anyways, with looperman dying out. I think it's more like this time of year, everyone's out and about. So it might not be as active, however I never saw this place as a place for people to listen. I always thought of it as something where you can get the advice from others on what can improve your track. And those people who actually take the time to listen and give honest feedback are all still here, dont worry :) Much Love man! And best of luck to you in the future!
7venth12
7venth12 replied 8th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thank you for the feedback, glad to hear some people still listen :) Glad you enjoyed the track as well!
StaticProjekt
StaticProjekt 7th Jun 2016 06:41 - 8 years ago
Very creative, really like the flow of the track, awesome vocal samples, one of my faves from here.
7venth12
7venth12 replied 8th Jun 2016 - 8 years ago
Thank you!!

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