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25th Nov 2016 03:32 - 8 years ago
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Description : A preview of my newest track.

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If you have time take a listen and give xertion some feedback.

ValveDriver
ValveDriver 26th Nov 2016 08:26 - 8 years ago
Xertion, Hello.

Considering it's a work in progress, it's pretty good.

The first thing I noticed was the lack of a sub bass line. But you've already said it's still a work in progress, so I won't go into that.
But, I would like to suggest a few other things.
First, your panning. You've got a decent amount of stereo on the whole thing, but each individual synth, or loop whichever you're using, should be panned to it's own place. Right now everything is riding straight down the middle, which doesn't give it a wide open spacious, and dynamic feel. For example, the background arp synth, could use a stereo enhancer to spread it wide open as a cradle for all the other sounds, since it's the main piece that's already carrying everything. Maybe even a touch of reverb. All the other sounds you're using could be panned to either the right or the left. But I would suggest not going more than 70% either way. Otherwise it will ride right up on the edges of the widened arp synth, and begin to bury it. Also, by doing so, it opens up room for the drums to breathe, and they will sit out a little more. As it is now, they're a little muddy and lost under the main synth line. In dubstep, the drums are generally quite prominent.
There are a few other suggestions I could give you, but I'll wait to see if you want them before I type them out.

You're on the right path, keep working this one, and you'll have a pretty good tune.

Take care.
Sloe.
xertion
xertion replied 26th Nov 2016 - 8 years ago
i appreciate the comment, you are spot on too. I will work with the panning for sure. I always tend to forget about that. Thanks for the comment
igorsamanski
igorsamanski 26th Nov 2016 02:41 - 8 years ago
thats a cool new sound, that veeow vwaa veeow, sounds cool I like towards the end you have like a video game sound, maybe add a sub bass to it while we hear the veeow vwaa veeow, btw Im listening to it right now in a cyber cafe with headphones on as oposed to in my house with the laptop speakers on,
xertion
xertion replied 26th Nov 2016 - 8 years ago
yeah the sub bass section is a work in progress still. Thanks for the comment and feedback, much appreciated.

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