Description : Unfinished.....
Just need some feedback on production....etc.
Update:
Version 25.... lol.... sounds better to me but....
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You have once again made an amazing song. I haven't been around looperman for quite a while now, and it is stuff like this that makes me kick myself for leaving for as long as I did.
This is a great song. I would still like to collab at some point if you haven't written that possibility off.
I like metal when it's played well and a bit of thought has gone into the mix. You have these in this one and I like the energy you bring into it also. For me the mix is about right, but then that's down to personal preference. Great Track !!
I'm not a big metal fan, but I don't mind taking in a bit of metal every now and then. It sounds like a pretty good production. It sounds like you have a good start. It does sound like the bottom end has fallen out on the Bass. Good luck with the post production of this tune. This track could be used however you can imagine. Add vocals and lengthen it a bit or use it as a soundtrack. Nice job!
Really... I was listening to this today at work in between Metallica, the new underoath (meh), and all that remains... and for some reason.. pound for pound, sound for sound.. this had ... something the others didn't. I really really like it.. One of my favs of yours soo far. You have ... a sense of urgency and ... like.. strength to your playing, that I feel is undeniable.
Secondly... I tried your tone, and ... I still didn't sound as awesome as you doo lol...
I remember reading some article about some guy picking up eddie van halen's guitar, thinking that it would sound and play just as great as it sounded, but when he did, he noticed he couldn't get that "Van Halen" sound.. and Eddie replied, "It's all in the fingers"
AND, let me tell you, you have the fingers! And.. something a little more..
I really respect you because you do it all.. bass (hehe kinda) drums and guitar, yet.. you are honestly comparable to a lot of the popular metal today.. in fact, I respect your work more, because you do IT ALL YOURSELF!!!!
I have been working on this a lot, but I have been really really really busy, I hope you understand, AND! I have a surprise for you, ... it involves vocals!
uhh yeah! thats a good one; good arrangement, good play, good recording; what would we expect more... (than a good shouting voice over it :-)
fat congrats!!!
(nice avatar btw :-)
Great Production, My Respect out to you man, Are Those drums EZ Drummer, i thought i noticed the snare. Also i like the sound, sounds like Dream theater Mixed With Opeth... Very Cool!
25th version, wow, thats dedication! I thought it was very good and i think there is only 1 thing missing that would make this top notch... vocals. Either sing on it yourself or get someone else to, thats all i think you need to do to it (well, if you did, you might need to tone down the guitar solos in a couple of places so they don't overpower the vocals). Nice job anyway!
Des broooo...E dobra je ova stvar pazi,ne sloosam ovo znas i sam :D,ali dobra je svidja mi se...Pojacaj malo taj loop,malo jace da se cuje,a ovo ostalo sve ostavi kako jeste jer je mnogo dobro(po meni sad kako oces ;))..Peace bro..
Seroksaty's Reply.................
Hi Randall,
I have troubles with kick drum and bass, i`m trying to fix it, but... on my speakers sounds OK.
Decent headphones could be a solution, i`ll check those you recommended...
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I am not sure what drum kit you are using. If your using them off a keyboard, they won't ever sound 'real and natural'.
You need a good Akai type drum machine or get drum loops off web sites.
Loopermans site has many free ones, but for complete sounding sets, try this site as they do have some free download samples in each section. www.betamonkeymusic.com This is what I use.
It has a funny name, but the drums are the same ones you hear in my tunes...if you like that sound.
But I have also heard 'Drummer 2.0' is a good program so look that program up on the web. (Just Google it)
Hi there Seroksaty,
Looks like I'll be your first reviewer and I appreciate your review of my Punk rock tune the other day.
Overall, it sounds good to me. I think the kick drum could be louder to add in more punch. If you can get a decent set of headphones, that could help you in sound levels of each instruments. Cheap headphones won't do it tho....as they'll be very little bass. I use Sennheiser HD 280 Pros.
Don't know what else to recommend at the moment, but sounds like your doing good to me.
Randy
Hi Randall,
I have troubles with kick drum and bass, i`m trying to fix it, but... on my speakers sounds OK.
Decent headphones could be a solution, i`ll check those you recommended...
Thanks for help...
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This is a great song. I would still like to collab at some point if you haven't written that possibility off.
Great work.
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collab is on....
just let me now when you are ready....
thanks for kind words....
Really... I was listening to this today at work in between Metallica, the new underoath (meh), and all that remains... and for some reason.. pound for pound, sound for sound.. this had ... something the others didn't. I really really like it.. One of my favs of yours soo far. You have ... a sense of urgency and ... like.. strength to your playing, that I feel is undeniable.
Secondly... I tried your tone, and ... I still didn't sound as awesome as you doo lol...
I remember reading some article about some guy picking up eddie van halen's guitar, thinking that it would sound and play just as great as it sounded, but when he did, he noticed he couldn't get that "Van Halen" sound.. and Eddie replied, "It's all in the fingers"
AND, let me tell you, you have the fingers! And.. something a little more..
I really respect you because you do it all.. bass (hehe kinda) drums and guitar, yet.. you are honestly comparable to a lot of the popular metal today.. in fact, I respect your work more, because you do IT ALL YOURSELF!!!!
I have been working on this a lot, but I have been really really really busy, I hope you understand, AND! I have a surprise for you, ... it involves vocals!
(BTW, I am thiiiirsty lol....)
I'm glad you like it....
Surprise?! Vocals?!
What??????????????
fat congrats!!!
(nice avatar btw :-)
Thanks!
i know...
thanks for review
Hi Randall,
I have troubles with kick drum and bass, i`m trying to fix it, but... on my speakers sounds OK.
Decent headphones could be a solution, i`ll check those you recommended...
=====================================================
I am not sure what drum kit you are using. If your using them off a keyboard, they won't ever sound 'real and natural'.
You need a good Akai type drum machine or get drum loops off web sites.
Loopermans site has many free ones, but for complete sounding sets, try this site as they do have some free download samples in each section. www.betamonkeymusic.com This is what I use.
It has a funny name, but the drums are the same ones you hear in my tunes...if you like that sound.
But I have also heard 'Drummer 2.0' is a good program so look that program up on the web. (Just Google it)
Hope this helps,
Randy
Your help is much appreciated!
Looks like I'll be your first reviewer and I appreciate your review of my Punk rock tune the other day.
Overall, it sounds good to me. I think the kick drum could be louder to add in more punch. If you can get a decent set of headphones, that could help you in sound levels of each instruments. Cheap headphones won't do it tho....as they'll be very little bass. I use Sennheiser HD 280 Pros.
Don't know what else to recommend at the moment, but sounds like your doing good to me.
Randy
I have troubles with kick drum and bass, i`m trying to fix it, but... on my speakers sounds OK.
Decent headphones could be a solution, i`ll check those you recommended...
Thanks for help...