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2nd Dec 2008 19:11 - 16 years ago
Description : Unfinished.....
Just need some feedback on production....etc.

Update:
Version 25.... lol.... sounds better to me but....

Comments (13)

If you have time take a listen and give Seroksaty some feedback.

MikeZippyVee
MikeZippyVee 2nd Feb 2011 11:40 - 14 years ago
Really great mastering. Who's hating and why? What the?! Keep it up!
36Chambers
36Chambers 27th Feb 2009 19:52 - 15 years ago
You have once again made an amazing song. I haven't been around looperman for quite a while now, and it is stuff like this that makes me kick myself for leaving for as long as I did.

This is a great song. I would still like to collab at some point if you haven't written that possibility off.

Great work.

-36
Seroksaty
Seroksaty replied Unknown
thanks.
collab is on....
just let me now when you are ready....
DanielGtrman
DanielGtrman 5th Feb 2009 12:56 - 16 years ago
I like metal when it's played well and a bit of thought has gone into the mix. You have these in this one and I like the energy you bring into it also. For me the mix is about right, but then that's down to personal preference. Great Track !!
Seroksaty
Seroksaty replied Unknown
thanks for kind words....
toddj
toddj 5th Jan 2009 12:44 - 16 years ago
I'm not a big metal fan, but I don't mind taking in a bit of metal every now and then. It sounds like a pretty good production. It sounds like you have a good start. It does sound like the bottom end has fallen out on the Bass. Good luck with the post production of this tune. This track could be used however you can imagine. Add vocals and lengthen it a bit or use it as a soundtrack. Nice job!
Seroksaty
Seroksaty replied Unknown
Hi toddj,
thanks for kind words....
alividlife
alividlife 1st Jan 2009 05:22 - 16 years ago
Awesome Riff wink wink...

Really... I was listening to this today at work in between Metallica, the new underoath (meh), and all that remains... and for some reason.. pound for pound, sound for sound.. this had ... something the others didn't. I really really like it.. One of my favs of yours soo far. You have ... a sense of urgency and ... like.. strength to your playing, that I feel is undeniable.
Secondly... I tried your tone, and ... I still didn't sound as awesome as you doo lol...

I remember reading some article about some guy picking up eddie van halen's guitar, thinking that it would sound and play just as great as it sounded, but when he did, he noticed he couldn't get that "Van Halen" sound.. and Eddie replied, "It's all in the fingers"

AND, let me tell you, you have the fingers! And.. something a little more..

I really respect you because you do it all.. bass (hehe kinda) drums and guitar, yet.. you are honestly comparable to a lot of the popular metal today.. in fact, I respect your work more, because you do IT ALL YOURSELF!!!!

I have been working on this a lot, but I have been really really really busy, I hope you understand, AND! I have a surprise for you, ... it involves vocals!

(BTW, I am thiiiirsty lol....)
Seroksaty
Seroksaty replied Unknown
Hey alivid...
I'm glad you like it....
Surprise?! Vocals?!
What??????????????
lowblow
lowblow 21st Dec 2008 19:16 - 16 years ago
uhh yeah! thats a good one; good arrangement, good play, good recording; what would we expect more... (than a good shouting voice over it :-)
fat congrats!!!
(nice avatar btw :-)
Seroksaty
Seroksaty replied Unknown
thanks
MadnessReigns
MadnessReigns 21st Dec 2008 17:32 - 16 years ago
Tight guitar work and kicking drums! this track rocks,once you're able to add more bottom it'll be outstanding.great work!
Seroksaty
Seroksaty replied Unknown
thanks
Acrylic
Acrylic 14th Dec 2008 22:21 - 16 years ago
Great Production, My Respect out to you man, Are Those drums EZ Drummer, i thought i noticed the snare. Also i like the sound, sounds like Dream theater Mixed With Opeth... Very Cool!
Seroksaty
Seroksaty replied Unknown
It`s "addictive drums"......
Thanks!
Bansek
Bansek 14th Dec 2008 21:30 - 16 years ago
Tori,odlicne su ove stvari.Preslusao sam za sad desetak....
Higher_Evolution
Higher_Evolution 13th Dec 2008 02:41 - 16 years ago
25th version, wow, thats dedication! I thought it was very good and i think there is only 1 thing missing that would make this top notch... vocals. Either sing on it yourself or get someone else to, thats all i think you need to do to it (well, if you did, you might need to tone down the guitar solos in a couple of places so they don't overpower the vocals). Nice job anyway!
Seroksaty
Seroksaty replied Unknown
vocalas....
i know...
thanks for review
Deja
Deja 3rd Dec 2008 12:06 - 16 years ago
Des broooo...E dobra je ova stvar pazi,ne sloosam ovo znas i sam :D,ali dobra je svidja mi se...Pojacaj malo taj loop,malo jace da se cuje,a ovo ostalo sve ostavi kako jeste jer je mnogo dobro(po meni sad kako oces ;))..Peace bro..
Seroksaty
Seroksaty replied Unknown
Hvala...
Randall822
Randall822 3rd Dec 2008 00:53 - 16 years ago
Seroksaty's Reply.................
Hi Randall,
I have troubles with kick drum and bass, i`m trying to fix it, but... on my speakers sounds OK.
Decent headphones could be a solution, i`ll check those you recommended...
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I am not sure what drum kit you are using. If your using them off a keyboard, they won't ever sound 'real and natural'.
You need a good Akai type drum machine or get drum loops off web sites.
Loopermans site has many free ones, but for complete sounding sets, try this site as they do have some free download samples in each section. www.betamonkeymusic.com This is what I use.

It has a funny name, but the drums are the same ones you hear in my tunes...if you like that sound.
But I have also heard 'Drummer 2.0' is a good program so look that program up on the web. (Just Google it)

Hope this helps,
Randy
Seroksaty
Seroksaty replied Unknown
Thank you very much!
Your help is much appreciated!
Randall822
Randall822 2nd Dec 2008 19:37 - 16 years ago
Hi there Seroksaty,
Looks like I'll be your first reviewer and I appreciate your review of my Punk rock tune the other day.

Overall, it sounds good to me. I think the kick drum could be louder to add in more punch. If you can get a decent set of headphones, that could help you in sound levels of each instruments. Cheap headphones won't do it tho....as they'll be very little bass. I use Sennheiser HD 280 Pros.

Don't know what else to recommend at the moment, but sounds like your doing good to me.
Randy
Seroksaty
Seroksaty replied Unknown
Hi Randall,
I have troubles with kick drum and bass, i`m trying to fix it, but... on my speakers sounds OK.
Decent headphones could be a solution, i`ll check those you recommended...
Thanks for help...

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