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13th Apr 2017 22:17 - 7 years ago
Description : [PLEASE WEAR HEADPHONES, THANKS]
I want to stick with my fantasy theme, but a bit more on the sci-fi side. This is for an album I'm working on called "Oblivion"

(I could use a female vocalist. If anyone's interested, please don't hesitate to email me :P)
Zivonmusic@gmail.com
Please give me your best feedback.

Cheers!
-Z

Comments (20)

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WARRIORDANIKA
WARRIORDANIKA 26th Mar 2019 02:45 - 5 years ago
Your talent is outstanding. This song is so well put together. Kudos~!
Nous2
Nous2 2nd Apr 2018 16:44 - 6 years ago
Like it !! Good Vibe ! Did You find someone to sing on ??
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 2nd Apr 2018 - 6 years ago
Glad you like it, though it still needs yo be mixed and mastered. No, unfortunately I have not.
Ericjar
Ericjar 26th Jun 2017 15:50 - 7 years ago
Used this loop here
https://youtu.be/pF40hys9krY
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 6th Jul 2017 - 7 years ago
Liked the vid!
Zdenuardo
Zdenuardo 20th May 2017 11:25 - 7 years ago
like that
Bolivar1
Bolivar1 20th May 2017 06:56 - 7 years ago
=) I love it
Ericjar
Ericjar 19th May 2017 19:47 - 7 years ago
I like it :)
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 19th May 2017 - 7 years ago
Thank you!
KLAUS7
KLAUS7 30th Apr 2017 04:07 - 7 years ago
gut stuff
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 19th May 2017 - 7 years ago
Thanks, bud!
Yerg322
Yerg322 28th Apr 2017 05:57 - 7 years ago
nice one~
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 18th May 2017 - 7 years ago
Thank you very much
Andreita99
Andreita99 21st Apr 2017 20:11 - 7 years ago
Cool!
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 19th May 2017 - 7 years ago
Glad you like it!
TroyDiamond
TroyDiamond 19th Apr 2017 21:50 - 7 years ago
Awesome
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 18th May 2017 - 7 years ago
Thanks man
btchimdying
btchimdying 16th Apr 2017 10:12 - 7 years ago
this remind me my 2012 dubstep period when i use to play call of duty while listening some good dubstep huh idk why really dope tho i like it
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 16th Apr 2017 - 7 years ago
Ayeeee! :) Thanks!
Modnex
Modnex 15th Apr 2017 19:47 - 7 years ago
I've enjoyed this track. Everything sounds good to me. But I'm not really a fan of the sound that comes in around 2:26 and onward. Those sounds in my opinion doesn't really fit the theme of the track and it really hurts the track. To me this track sounds like a fantasy chillstep track and I believe all the sounds you use should fit said theme. I would suggest changing the sounds that come in towards the end to something more light rather than the hard-ish sounds used. Once you fix that I think this track would be great and vocals will only add.

Nice work!
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 15th Apr 2017 - 7 years ago
Thank you very much for the in-depth analysis. It help a lot!

I'm glad you actually see the concept i was going for. Most people see something different.

As for your quom about 2:26, I need to take a look and see what you mean. I didnt make that much of a difference between the first and second drop.
letsmakeafoundation
letsmakeafoundation 15th Apr 2017 19:44 - 7 years ago
I love your song, can I use it to sing on it for my EP? I'll give you credits :)
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 15th Apr 2017 - 7 years ago
Email me please: zivonmusic@gmail.com
Danke
Danke 15th Apr 2017 07:27 - 7 years ago
this is a fantastic soundtrack music...the last theme when the hero found her love and they just sit together silently and stare to the horizon think about the 3rd world war and the result : they are the last ones...:-)

as you said it's a bit rough mix, we can hear it at the end, around 2.45 when some groovy bass? synth appears in a horribly overdriven status...

handshake, Danke
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 15th Apr 2017 - 7 years ago
Thank you for this awesome comment dude! Your story was pretty awesome too. Very helpful thank you.
-Zivon
Judah76
Judah76 14th Apr 2017 09:20 - 7 years ago
I have mixed feelings about this.
Pros:
Very harmonic; easy on the ears; great running time (mainly because of the following Cons)...
Cons:
Sounds like elevator music; doesn't invoke that feeling to click "replay" over and over...

You said you'll be expanding on it. From my perspective, it needs a little more dynamics in its presentation. I see the mood is intended to invoke a mellow atmosphere, it does, so the dynamics I'm talking about is not some major twist or transition. Maybe another instrument to guide the progression or ease in and out to create an extra flavor. I do it often in my new work: TARGET PRACTICE (4/22/2017)[4 track demo album].

But its not bad!
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 14th Apr 2017 - 7 years ago
Thank yoy very much! This is very in-depth and helpful!
Baywoodvevo
Baywoodvevo 14th Apr 2017 06:34 - 7 years ago
Awesome lets work - email me - jordanjnr16@gmail.com
Baywoodvevo
Baywoodvevo 14th Apr 2017 06:19 - 7 years ago
The idea is there, There is some noticeable mixing issues that I could help you with . email me :) And maybe you could help me some of my songs !!
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 14th Apr 2017 - 7 years ago
Thank you. Please also bear in mind that this is a rough, unmastered WIP that I will update regularly. I am interested to see what you can do mastering-wise to the final version. :)
itsMichaelLacroix
itsMichaelLacroix 14th Apr 2017 02:39 - 7 years ago
When you make a song and want to add some vocals to is email me djzmike@hotmail.ca
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 1st May 2017 - 7 years ago
This email doesn't work...
JAM17
JAM17 14th Apr 2017 01:48 - 7 years ago
nice job
itsMichaelLacroix
itsMichaelLacroix 14th Apr 2017 00:24 - 7 years ago
Want to Collaborate sometime?
Zivonmusic
Zivonmusic replied 14th Apr 2017 - 7 years ago
I'd love to.

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