Description : [PLEASE WEAR HEADPHONES, THANKS]
I want to stick with my fantasy theme, but a bit more on the sci-fi side. This is for an album I'm working on called "Oblivion"
(I could use a female vocalist. If anyone's interested, please don't hesitate to email me :P)
Zivonmusic@gmail.com
Please give me your best feedback.
Cheers!
-Z
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I've enjoyed this track. Everything sounds good to me. But I'm not really a fan of the sound that comes in around 2:26 and onward. Those sounds in my opinion doesn't really fit the theme of the track and it really hurts the track. To me this track sounds like a fantasy chillstep track and I believe all the sounds you use should fit said theme. I would suggest changing the sounds that come in towards the end to something more light rather than the hard-ish sounds used. Once you fix that I think this track would be great and vocals will only add.
this is a fantastic soundtrack music...the last theme when the hero found her love and they just sit together silently and stare to the horizon think about the 3rd world war and the result : they are the last ones...:-)
as you said it's a bit rough mix, we can hear it at the end, around 2.45 when some groovy bass? synth appears in a horribly overdriven status...
I have mixed feelings about this.
Pros:
Very harmonic; easy on the ears; great running time (mainly because of the following Cons)...
Cons:
Sounds like elevator music; doesn't invoke that feeling to click "replay" over and over...
You said you'll be expanding on it. From my perspective, it needs a little more dynamics in its presentation. I see the mood is intended to invoke a mellow atmosphere, it does, so the dynamics I'm talking about is not some major twist or transition. Maybe another instrument to guide the progression or ease in and out to create an extra flavor. I do it often in my new work: TARGET PRACTICE (4/22/2017)[4 track demo album].
Thank you. Please also bear in mind that this is a rough, unmastered WIP that I will update regularly. I am interested to see what you can do mastering-wise to the final version. :)
Description : Feel free to check out the video on YT as well (Alan McLaren Project - Upside Down) of this 6min journey from electronic to rock with some psychedelic moments...
This is my latest, but also one of my earliest tracks.... any feedback is more than welcome, thanks :)
Description : A demo of one of my current projects. The chorus vocal sounds like "Aaaaraashe" to me. The song is in C# minor with a nod to C# pythagorean on the chorus. The beat on the verse was inspired by the Peter Gabriel song Intruder.
Description : This is one of my earliest productions that I did at the start of my recording career. I did not have a keyboard at the time I made this song, so I improvised and used my sister's iPad and a 5 dollar GarageBand application instead, and plugged the headset jack into into my PT6 rig and did my best to turn each individual track (which were mono and there were about 25 tracks or so) into a stereo image. Then recorded vocals over it. My computer was so old and slow that I had to mix my music and then BOUNCE it to a new session - four times. My computer (which had 512 MB RAM and an 80 GB hard drive) couldn't handle more than 8 tracks at a time or it'd stop working because the processor couldn't handle it. Took me FOREVER to do. But I got it done. Had a lot of fun doing it too, even if it isn't my "best" work. I'm still happy with it, considering I didn't have many tools to choose from at the time.
Description : Long time lurker first time poster, pretty new to production n stuff, this is my first track in Ableton Live.
was going for a darkwave/synthwave sound, reminiscent of Justice, Carpenter Brut, Perturbator, ect.
Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
Description : Far out mid-tempo fat beat deep chillout grooves with Eastern/Arabic and slightly menacing vibes, huge delayed synth bass and a great palette of psychedelic layered and intricate sounds (mostly synths) and a stirring, epic feel. Even has guitar solo section reminiscent of some 80s power rock which is then followed by a brief synth harp solo. I began making it straight after staying round the flat of the flute player from the legendary Ozric Tentacles - easily the greatest ever space rock band. I made this in about 2001 and still think it might be my best track (and it's nice and short, for a change). My production skills were much weaker in those days (no EQ, compression or mastering used here) but, somehow, this one turned out pretty much just right. Feel free to disagree. Now sit back and get ready to trip extremely far out. If you manage to return, let me know how that trip was...
Description : Got some spare time finally...just started on some random ideas basically (lets say kygo meets alan walker). A blend of dubstep,edm,downbeat,tropical etc.
It's still a work in progress, so i would appreciate your honest inputs. Thanks to all those whose loops I have used in here, sorry I don't have time to search them out.
Edit-added some more filthy sounds from my previous tracks and gave it some ending. Advice will be helpful.
https://youtu.be/pF40hys9krY
Nice work!
I'm glad you actually see the concept i was going for. Most people see something different.
As for your quom about 2:26, I need to take a look and see what you mean. I didnt make that much of a difference between the first and second drop.
as you said it's a bit rough mix, we can hear it at the end, around 2.45 when some groovy bass? synth appears in a horribly overdriven status...
handshake, Danke
-Zivon
Pros:
Very harmonic; easy on the ears; great running time (mainly because of the following Cons)...
Cons:
Sounds like elevator music; doesn't invoke that feeling to click "replay" over and over...
You said you'll be expanding on it. From my perspective, it needs a little more dynamics in its presentation. I see the mood is intended to invoke a mellow atmosphere, it does, so the dynamics I'm talking about is not some major twist or transition. Maybe another instrument to guide the progression or ease in and out to create an extra flavor. I do it often in my new work: TARGET PRACTICE (4/22/2017)[4 track demo album].
But its not bad!