Description : Spoken word - melodic talking - redneck hiphop - dubpop - I dunno. This song is part of "The Love Offensive" where I'm writing a bunch of simple, direct songs around the theme of more love, less hate. Just going with the flow of my natural weirdness. Orchestration is 5 loops from rmce, thedarkflamemaster, bosni, rasputin1963 and blackmansta10. Please let me know what you think.
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This is an excellent Spoken Word track. It sounds like a raw reflection of what's just under the emotional surface, and I think that's what Spoken Word should be about. I can almost hear a Johnny Cash cadence that just makes it even more enjoyable to listen to. Thanks for posting this.
Thanks for listening and commenting, BigAlDente. I always wonder if I should ever get out the chainsaw voice or just leave it in the garage with all the other useless junk, and your encouragement means a lot to me. Thank you!
I really like this.
I can imagine my favourite artist of all time (Tom Waits) doing this.
Sounds excellent.
The only bit I'm not keen on is the tantrum toward the end ... I've lost nothing!Nothing nothing nothing!
Doesn't suit the very emotional and masculine vibe.
Thank you, silverman. Please tell Mr. Tom to give me a call, he can sing it all day if he wants. I will consider that tantrum at the end and probably give that part another go for a little different vibe there. I appreciate the feedback a lot. Thank you!
Hi Metabolic, thank you for your listen and feedback. I like your ideas and I'll mess around with it some more. New genre? It's just stuff I like to do, and then I wonder if anyone else will like it or just think it's weird, or even think it's music, so I'm very glad to hear that you like it. I'll let you know when I post a new draft. Thanks again.
Description : Paul Dimestop told me to not care about my voice and rap.
So I made a little rap and this is just for fun only.
Everything made by me hope you like it :P
Description : HEY EVERYONE...BEEN A WHILE....HOPE ALL IS GOOD.....A CHILL TRACK WITH NICE MSG.....THATS HEMANIFEST ON VOX...AND A BEAT SOUPED UP BY REDOFFICIAL.....I PUT IT TOGETHER THIS WEEK,,,FEELS TO BE BACK...LIKE THE NEW SET UP
Description : Shades of HipnoSis is Sexy! Shades of HipnoSis is romantic, soulful, hip hop & R&B. It's also very poetical. He's talking about how this sensual female put him in a trance. After the initial lyrics,
Kamal let's the groove ride so you can ride with it. Enjoy the female neo soul voice on the hook as well.
Description : Retweaked the spoken word a litte April 2023 Also ADDED THE POEM in the lyrics section
My Guitar and Harmonica - both treated
Reading of Poem Softly by Aaron Kramer
Main beat is a drum loop, with a kick added and one sample - all manipulated
Other versions had more percussion but not needed I think
Description : Spoken Word with Rhythm. It's a song about dedication and being there for the one you love. People can easily say what they are going to do but not really mean any of the words. I learned a hard lesson in that today.
Description : I was writing another type of track and this "Spoken Word" I ran across kinda hi-jacked the track. At least I'll have the Genre right this time.
Description : Hi there! Well, this is a track for the phatkatz4's Halloween Track Challenge [https://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/183960/halloween-track-challenge]. It's not a music, but... it's a track :P . Sorry about my accent. My native language is spanish, my english is not perfect, so sorry for mistakes (grammar, pronunciation, etc). I hope you like it. Thanks! SUN & MOON... FIRE & ICE HEART... LIGHT & DARK FUSION...
Description : Having done a Robot Trilogy, maybe I’m now doing a Plant Trilogy, with this being number 2 following March of the Seedlings.
Samples used:
Rasputin - Krafty Bassline 2
Josee1969 - Drum And Bass 43 - Saluable Salt
xKingK420x - Tele 2
xKingK420x - Tele 1
lasse1011 - Dark Melodic Lofi Chords
ECKSjoe - Cymbal Roll
Schnatter - In A Cold Cold World There Is Someone
Arrant - Redpriest X Digicore Pluck Loop - Back Part 1
CelloCubano - Welcome Home Bongos
Ceezx - Triangle Ding
This gives awarness for mental health issues. A mother struggling with post partum depression trying not drown her child see more on reverbnation.com/effluence facebook:effluence
I can imagine my favourite artist of all time (Tom Waits) doing this.
Sounds excellent.
The only bit I'm not keen on is the tantrum toward the end ... I've lost nothing!Nothing nothing nothing!
Doesn't suit the very emotional and masculine vibe.
I don't know what to think of this.
I like it.
"Nothing, nothing, nothing" I would add some fx as is fades.
"I've lost nothing" I'd add a big single kick/boom just after that, i'd fit somewhere around 2:00, in my head it sounds reverberated.
I think a few "cinematic" addition would make this much more.
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