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27th Nov 2018 13:08 - 6 years ago
Description : More of a VIP. cleaned it up and made it extra squeaky

"21 savage & future - X"

Synthesized in Serum

Please give me some critical feedback, i want it to be perfect

Credits: tmtmusic - Chill Guitar Loop. I threw it into newtone and figured out the midi then added my own synths and expanded on the melody. The loop is only used in the very beginning

Comments (10)

If you have time take a listen and give hobertni some feedback.

kingmadi
kingmadi 19th Feb 2019 01:29 - 5 years ago
Very creative! I'd definitely say add more melody though just so the squeaks don't get too piercing. Harder bass on the drops too.
hobertni
hobertni replied 19th Feb 2019 - 5 years ago
thanks for the feedback. TBH i don't really know what your talking about when you say "add more melody"

The sub bumps pretty hard when i play this in my car. i tried a bunch of different ways of trying to turn the sub up but when its any louder than it is, it starts to distort pretty badly (assuming this is what you mean by harder bass). So the sub is pretty much as loud as digitally possible. Bass has a weird way of sounding better when it's 'quieter'. Obviously the noises i chose for this song have a lot of high pitched harmonic tones so if you aren't listening on an actual speaker thats all you'll be able to hear during the drop

Side note, the squeaks are my shit, especially these ones, and they are the best part of the melody in my opinion. (Honestly one of the cleanest high pitched bass noises ive ever heard, idk. prove me wrong). I understand to some they might be ear piercing but to others they're face melting and to me they're dank.

fuck this comment was too long my b lol. I hope i don't come off as defensive either thats not my tone, i appreciate the feedback i just don't really know what you mean by it
DrowsyCarnivore
DrowsyCarnivore 17th Feb 2019 16:12 - 5 years ago
Head Banging!
fibonacci1185
fibonacci1185 17th Feb 2019 15:59 - 5 years ago
Very creative..
1234bang
1234bang 13th Dec 2018 00:17 - 6 years ago
this is a very dope song man
MajesticA
MajesticA 2nd Dec 2018 01:29 - 6 years ago
this song is amazing i think that the drop could have had a harder drum beat to suit it or something to go with it. mabye that is just how i feel
hobertni
hobertni replied 2nd Dec 2018 - 6 years ago
I feel you. I think it depends on what kind of speaker you're listening on. In my car speaker the drums slap pretty fuckin hard

thanks for the feedback tho
RBphantomX
RBphantomX 1st Dec 2018 03:09 - 6 years ago
niceeee
SouljahSlim3000
SouljahSlim3000 1st Dec 2018 01:36 - 6 years ago
Yoooo! this joint is str8t fire!!! Oh snap!
bkoziet
bkoziet 30th Nov 2018 10:01 - 6 years ago
nice one!
Interitus
Interitus 28th Nov 2018 16:30 - 6 years ago
I feel like more melodic elements to the drop would make it even better.
hobertni
hobertni replied 28th Nov 2018 - 6 years ago
I agree with this. Definitely could've added some extra percs and small noises/fills to give it more of an atmosphere. Towards the end of making this I got a little lazy and didn't do any of that. My library is pretty small anyways so I might want to think about expanding it

I appreciate the feedback
WilliamCarpenter
WilliamCarpenter 28th Nov 2018 02:01 - 6 years ago
Caught my ear . Thanks
hobertni
hobertni replied 28th Nov 2018 - 6 years ago
glad u like

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