The point that stands out to me is right when the beat comes in. Finding that sweet spot and getting a good loop is what I would do. You could add some variance latter with a bridge or hook section. It seems experimental which is good, but each transition has to magnitize the listener at least as much as the prior section unless there is a downtempo for effect. Just my opinions. Very interesting work.

This has potential! Unique sound. Thats what I mostly look for. Do you stand out? I believe you do. The beat structure could use some work, overall its a bit raw, production could use a little work, but like i said it has potential. Keep it up man. Im always down to work on something when im not tied up in other projects. Peace.

Not bad, but for sure missing something that makes this track special... give an ambient to drums, for example, in my ears seems too flat. Moreover, as it was developed it is also difficult to put a vocal track on it, because in my opinion the best part (0:37 to 1:07) sound only once while deserve to be repeated. The ending drumline needs some variations, in a so short track can sound little little boring. Really like the use of vintage ride on this, is one of my favourite samples. I don't know if it's your first track ever, anyway you can definitely improve, after all it's not so bad.