I FUCKIN LOVE HARDCORE. So be warned, i have high standards when it comes to it. The intro had a nice dark feel to it. The beat is great and dirty which is alright, and the mono synth is really nice accually. I like how much detune the secondary has as well! this would be bad to listen to on acid for sure! Oh yeah, and this would not really be classified as hardcore.
check out my tracks sometime? Lorin (Dj Somnium)

Definitely hardcore in my opinion, even if it's not generic hardcore (all the better right?). I love the purposeful distortion on so many elements of the mix, and the glitchiness is really fun. Keep it up, hope to hear more!

I noticed you had squarepusher as an inspiration. Amazing bass player. My uncle got to work with him and he told me he is a real jerk. Haha just telling you.

The drums don't get the solid sound they need, they work good for the intro. At some point you need a good solid kick and snare and all those cymbals you are going to use them and make them hit hard with a dirty bassline.

Great first track!

-DaMann

totally mentalist really like your direction here, personally felt as if the drums could have busted out into something different as the track dropped, anyway keep it up nice style!

Regardless of the quantity or quality! the first track sets the pace and the stepping stone for the next which will be better than the first and the never ending journey to satisfy the desire to make music and be creative! satisfy yourself first of all and everything will fall into place accordingly! "Nice Job".....G.

...good job for your first track.. hardcore! ..looking forward to the next one.

Ok, your first track? i did like the intro, but not to be a pain in the ass or anything but didnt sound very dnb. I like what you did with the chopping though. sound effects were very interesting.