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16th Apr 2022 19:39 - 2 years ago
Description : In this song I imagine life 30,000 years ago. I'm fascinated by this stuff and so made a song about it, based on the trap track, looperman-t-3188221-0207457-beat-hiphop-crazy-siren-part-2, which, unchanged, is the scaffolding for these lyrics. I've written many "normal" songs as well -- verse, chorus, bridge constructions -- but there’s much in this world that just can't be contained in that format. Very curious what people think about this thing. (The DAW was Audacity, not in the list.)

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give CitizenMofo2 some feedback.

RitajustRita
RitajustRita 17th Apr 2022 21:50 - 2 years ago
Wauw how you didd that with your voice!!
Sounds great.
Im also agree with the others...its hypnotizing.
about your discription... there was 30.000 years ago already trap? Now I see the flinstones dancing on this track lol
Zootman
Zootman 17th Apr 2022 11:23 - 2 years ago
Well that was an awesome enjoyable trip. Mrs A got it right when she called it hypnotizing. The vocal processing totally suits the track. Weird but engaging and interesting lyrically. I do like words! I know what you mean when you say it's hard to objectively and critically listen to your own stuff. Best I can do is put it to one side for a good while until I have fresh ears, but it's hard sometimes to even do that cause personally I start getting obsessive about wanting to finish it.
CitizenMofo2
CitizenMofo2 replied 17th Apr 2022 - 2 years ago
"Weird and engaging and interesting lyrically" -- that is truly what I'm going for. The "weird" part, I can't help, of course. Or I can help, and so I choose to be weird. I watch which way the herd is going, and then I go the opposite way. Because the herd always gets it wrong. So weird is a choice. Engaging and interesting lyrically is the hope. And the pride I take in my work, really, because I like to think that I'm a pretty decent lyricist. So thank you!
Angelus777
Angelus777 17th Apr 2022 06:34 - 2 years ago
Hey Citizen, Man that voice is very compelling, it's demanding attention & it definitely got mine lol...This whole track is a piece of hypnotizing musical Art!...Have you ever thought about doing voice overs?...In any case wonderful! creation here indeed & much enjoyed! Kudos!
CitizenMofo2
CitizenMofo2 replied 17th Apr 2022 - 2 years ago
Thank you, Lady A! I appreciate your wonderful comment!
No, I have never thought about doing voice overs.
This is my voice bassified, of course, as you know. If it were my real voice, I'd probably be famous.
I have done various things though, as I'm sure you have. You can see me as Weird Grandpa on Tiktok, for example. Yes, that's me in the monkey hat. I think, going forward, I will use Weird Grandpa as my musical name. It's friendlier sounding than Citizen Mofo, and, in truth, I am a weird grandpa.
Anyway, thank you. I really appreciate you.
theHumps
theHumps 17th Apr 2022 04:25 - 2 years ago
Check this out, the Thunderbolt Project, these guys propose the universe's cosmology is electric, people are electric, planets and stars are electromagnetic in nature, they have magnetic fields, right? That's why some stars are brighter and some dimmer, they are reacting to their electric potential surroundings. Black holes are easily explained, that's where energy is accepted into the galaxy. Explains the jets seen streaming out of the middle of galaxies. Certainly more logical than the crazy math and physics used to explain black holes. Sorry, Steven Hawkins was wrong. Gravity can be explained in the electric universe. And it's all backed up with science, science that universities won't teach because of funding issues. Governments and donors will not fund new thinking, even if it proves the existing science wrong. It's always been that way and always will. Wal Thornhill is a genius.

https://www.thunderbolts.info/wp/

https://www.youtube.com/user/ThunderboltsProject/videos

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5AUA7XS0TvA

You'll like this, makes you stop and rethink the universe when it's more easily explained by science that nasa refuses to accept and skirts around all the evidence they keep finding that supports the electric universe.

Cheers!
CitizenMofo2
CitizenMofo2 replied 17th Apr 2022 - 2 years ago
I will check this stuff out, and thank you. And I would in turn draw your attention to macrophages. Watch them chasing bacteria and eating them and realize there's some form of consciousness and intelligence going on there at the cellular level. This is in our own body, uncontrolled by our brain, multiplied times a billion. Then watch videos on mycorrhizae, underground networks of fungal roots and plant roots that are intelligent networks spanning entire forests and connecting thousands of plants. Begin to understand that the forest is a single organism, with its intelligence undergound and consisting of networks of roots. You can watch videos of fluids moving through the mycorrhizae, then instantly changing direction. An intelligent decision being made where there is no brain. Then look into the cosmic web of dark matter that existed shortly after the Big Bang, which consolidated hydrogen into the first super massive black holes which now seem to be the central pillar of every galaxy (and there are trillions). Do you see where this is going. Networked matter is the source of intelligence in our universe, whether under the ground or in our own brains or in the structure of the universe. And then I suggest studying waves. Everything moves in waves, including electromagnetism which you mention. Anyway, fascinating stuff!
theHumps
theHumps 17th Apr 2022 02:58 - 2 years ago
I write many of my songs without using that "verse, chorus, bridge" formula. To me it allows the lyrics to be more flowing and less structured, creating variety in the melody. Wish you included the lyrics because this is pretty cool! Neat effects on the vocals, unless that's your actual voice, he. The music is very tribal, percussive and a bit aggressive, fitting for the track, well done!

I watch a lot of university lectures on anthropology, early civilizations, physics....on youtube. It is interesting to wonder how people lived in the past, how smart they were to live and exist without electricity, heated homes, grocery stores....

Good one man!

Wayne
CitizenMofo2
CitizenMofo2 replied 17th Apr 2022 - 2 years ago
Thank you, Wayne. I, too, watch tons of YouTube videos on everything from ancient footprints to black holes. It is crazy interesting to learn about everything, because everything's connected. The shit we learned is school was all wrong -- all of it -- and the only way to really understand anything at all is to keep learning your whole life, because your brain is a muscle, and the more you use it, the stronger it gets. Learning, thus, for me, is a spiritual journey. So yeah, I love to learn about the ancients and how they lived. Lately, I'm really interested in Gobekli Tepe and the ancient Egyptians. I think the past is wide open and being completely rewritten. There may have been waves of civilization that were lost. I'm open-minded about everything -- just fascinated with it all, as it sounds like you are. Thank you!
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 16th Apr 2022 22:51 - 2 years ago
Hi CitizenMofo2,
This is a brilliant Trap track, my friend.
It is really captivating to the end.
Well done.
Maj
CitizenMofo2
CitizenMofo2 replied 17th Apr 2022 - 2 years ago
Thank you! I so appreciate your comment because I wondered, is this boring? Are people gonna get tired of it by the middle? One honestly does not know about one's own stuff, and so your input is extremely valuable to me. Thank you!

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