EXCELLENT! From the saturation on the entrance guitar and throughout to the banging and kicking drum mix all the way down with the expressive melodies this is FiRE! Well done Lonelyawxy! Very well done.
Another great track, specially wrote for the vocs! Hope you'll find someone ... melodies are dreat, guitars are on top as the drums but if you allow me to comment, the final mixing (or mastering) is a tad bit harsh ... even within it, the drum (the snare drum) sticks out a lot ... I listened to it on my tabletop speaker (they say that you should listen to the songs on the worst possible stuff, because if they sound well they say, then even more so with big stuff) ... so, the volume knob was all on three at scale (of course 10 is the maximum) ... when I turned it up, the sound became very mushy ...
but that's a sideline note ... the music is extraordinary ...
fistbump, Danke
Thank you so much for your opinion, it's really important to me! I've really listened to your advice about balancing and used it in mixing of new track.
There is some great dynamics in the track. The song is solid, would love to hear some proper vocals on it.
I think it would benefit the song to maybe cut some of the limiting or compression on the master track. I think it would help separate the instruments a bit more and help cut some of the overdrive. It's just a bit hot to my ears and looking at the waveform it suggests that. But I also know some people want that sound and it may be done intentionally so take that all with what my old ears tell me. :)
Thank you for your comment, bro. Yeah, that's really distorted and very compressed, thanks for noticing that, will take this into account in the future!
great track Lonely, good intro like the drum drop out on .35 the melody is lovely its delicate good soft rock the bass is gritty, like endless, vox on this would send it soaring. well done mate im enjoying what your bringing keep up the hard graft bro
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Another great track, specially wrote for the vocs! Hope you'll find someone ... melodies are dreat, guitars are on top as the drums but if you allow me to comment, the final mixing (or mastering) is a tad bit harsh ... even within it, the drum (the snare drum) sticks out a lot ... I listened to it on my tabletop speaker (they say that you should listen to the songs on the worst possible stuff, because if they sound well they say, then even more so with big stuff) ... so, the volume knob was all on three at scale (of course 10 is the maximum) ... when I turned it up, the sound became very mushy ...
but that's a sideline note ... the music is extraordinary ...
fistbump, Danke
Cheers, Lonelyawxy.
Michael
I think it would benefit the song to maybe cut some of the limiting or compression on the master track. I think it would help separate the instruments a bit more and help cut some of the overdrive. It's just a bit hot to my ears and looking at the waveform it suggests that. But I also know some people want that sound and it may be done intentionally so take that all with what my old ears tell me. :)
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Lonelyawxy.