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18th Feb 2009 11:03 - 15 years ago
Description : Just wanted to make a straightforward hardrock/metal-track.
Here's the result.

Comments (11)

If you have time take a listen and give Steinaa some feedback.

JJWeekz
JJWeekz 13th Apr 2013 20:47 - 11 years ago
I was experimenting with the Christian rock genre.

I'll probably take it down soon because I'm not happy with the vocal effects yet and of course need to finish it, but wanted to show you how you inspired me by your track!

https://soundcloud.com/jjweekz/retribution-sample-steinaa
TysonAndrew
TysonAndrew 13th Aug 2011 06:13 - 13 years ago
Epic. It's hard, but melodic at the same time. Nice work.
lofthouse
lofthouse 21st Jun 2010 20:16 - 14 years ago
Was so thrilled to see your track featured and had to come listen.
Worth the visit as always,you still rock the house!
Cyryus08
Cyryus08 1st Apr 2009 23:10 - 15 years ago
You get my first review after a long hiatus from Looperman! I don't really do metal...unless...it really has some real quality. This is good. It makes me wanna go snowboarding or BMX biking or do doughnuts around the school parking lot in my Mazda. I agree that it is short, but I like it. Very cool.

Cyryus
Steinaa
Steinaa replied Unknown
Haha. Awesome review, thanks. I just have one question though.
Which Mazda is it? :>
realizet813
realizet813 9th Mar 2009 21:47 - 15 years ago
Its a lil short but real heavy. It feels more like a short demo of your skills rather than a whole song. You really gotta get some vocals on this track though.
Budablaze
Budablaze 6th Mar 2009 08:31 - 15 years ago
Maaad maaad track...its so wicked...i love it.i dont usually listen to rock but this i can...while on my most wanted game..its all am sticking to..This is huge.big up
Steinaa
Steinaa replied Unknown
Awesome words man - appreciate it alot!
And thanks for your review :)
anchor
anchor 27th Feb 2009 21:33 - 15 years ago
This one kicks ass as well. Excellent guitar work. I wanna get it and put an angry growl over it. Why are you not signed, Steinaa?
Steinaa
Steinaa replied Unknown
I would love to hear this one with vocals, so sure thing - just let me listen to it when you're done :)
Signed? Well.. heh. There's a shitload of better guitarists than me out there :p
But thanks! :)
ReapHavok
ReapHavok 24th Feb 2009 21:05 - 15 years ago
Nice I like it, very new age and very inventive.
Steinaa
Steinaa replied Unknown
Nice to hear mate :)
TheMorningDivide
TheMorningDivide 20th Feb 2009 21:22 - 15 years ago
Awesome song! Reminds me of Paradise Lost or Sentenced!! Keep this song guitar driven, no pads! Maybe Double bass kicks here and there for some extra punch...either way it still kicks ass, nice work.
Steinaa
Steinaa replied Unknown
Thank you sir! Double bass kicks are noted, and will be put into the song - thanks again mate :)
Hornankaivo
Hornankaivo 20th Feb 2009 11:49 - 15 years ago
Yeah nice guitar work indeed...
Some vocals would be great.
Good work!
Steinaa
Steinaa replied Unknown
Thanks mate :)
Still hoping that someone will try to add some vocals to it!
b5cully
b5cully 18th Feb 2009 13:08 - 15 years ago
this may be just crazy idea of mine, but maybe some additional pads on the main theme (~0:50 to 1:16) would probably add some dramatical feeling. Well, that's what popped up in my mind when I heard that part, so let's say it's kind of inspiring to me.
The lead guitar could have been a bit louder, but I like the mood you created in this song. Fast, brutal, ready to fight. ;) Nice track.
Steinaa
Steinaa replied Unknown
I see what you mean with some additional pads.
I might do something about that - and the lead could maybe been abit louder, I agree on that one..
But thank you for your input mate :)

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Applied loops (full or partially):
PLANETJAZZBASS : 0111346-0014566 - (funkenstone), 0111346-0039117 - (my goat is sick), 0111346-0014648 - (black bomber), 0111346-0018490 - (heat shield), 0111346-0038108 - (sennheiser zen 1), 0111346-0038109 - (sennheiser zen 2), 0111346-0015208 - (pig milk), 0111346-0019635 - (hippo pool), 0111346-0032035 - (bover boots), 0111346-0014682 - (trekkin time), 0111346-0014803 - (i told you so), 0111346-0014561 - (frontal lobe), 0111346-0020779 - (fat flies), 0111346-0032147 - (smooth shoes).
MEGAPAUL : 0448131-0058899 (E 100BPM 4 bars main riff), 0448131-0058767 (HM A 85BPM 4bars), 0448131-0059390 (D-Red-Ralf-has-gone-120BPM-8bars)
REI4REAL : 0039029-0001514 (rei iron E 75), 0039029-0001680 (rei hammer 02 D 140)
ACIDTONE : 0037502-0002671 (double kick bass with china)
ANCHOR : 0072432-0001749 (lots o double bass trash)
XARNOR : 0085913-0008990 (metal drum loop)
GUITARGURU : 0057331-0001168 (wavey rock riff), 0057331-0001169 (robot talk)
BLAQHSTARRMUSIC : 00665575-0014482 (acoustic overdrive gt)
SPIVKURL : 0186161-0065468 (acidic arpeggio)
CHILLDADDY : 0067852-0001439 (indian calling tom tom)
PSYCHOTROPIC_CIRCLE : 0071878-0003099 (lion perc and orc 01), 0071878-0002818 (salsa groove 01), 0071878-0003153 (fx el 3 114)
SASH : 0020884-0001302 (screaming feedback)
LJSHADOW : 0144345-0014306 (hitter)
DRMISTERSIR : 0208341-0069232 (she loves it)
WADIZZLE5000 : 0711434-0054859 (break break break)
STREETSBEATZ : 0959110-0062623 (ratchet gutta - ride)
DJ_FRED_VAL : 0002663-0002511 (fv roland dr-550 120), 0002663-0006690 (fv rock beat 140), 0002663-0008079 (fv xylo attack 140)
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