Nice work - I wonder if you fade some of synth sounds in and out a little more the sound would be less settled in the middle (as Manuela says) and you might make more space for other elements in the track / we might hear some different frequencies, but it is really good already. And hey you have a lifetime of making music ahead of you, can you imagine how good you are going to sound by the time the next birthday comes : )

It's already been your birthday, but still
congratulations on your birthday.
Your patience has paid off.
A very nice track.
Very well done.

nice composition with finesse, very pleasant to listen to! good job dude!
Michael

It is amazing.

It sounds mysterious and interesting)

Hello, first of all I'm amazed by the work you've done here! The composition, the structure, the use of the instruments and the effects are outstanding. The voice generated by the synthesizer is excellent! This could be a very big song. If you still put time and energy into the mix and mastering. There is still a lot that can be done. The sound chokes a bit. Frequently everything is settled too much in the middle. The same applies to the volume. You rob the song of the power it could have. Try to change that, then you can have a great future with the song and maybe also with future songs! Greetings Manuela