No, unfortunately it still doesn't work. I'll send you my email address tomorrow via the message service. Then you can send it by mail right?

Hi Alex, unfortunately the link doesn't work.

Hello Alex
Nice! I think you inserted your voice wonderfully, very soulful, very expressive. Thanks! However, you made a small mistake in the transition at 1:04.
Nevertheless very very nice!
Based on the comments I've read here, I realize that there has been a development with the song. So thanks to everyone who gave tips here!
Sorry that I'm only getting in touch now, but things are going haywire with the 2 sisters at the moment. I'll be happy when Manuela is back next week.
I want to tell you, my dear friend, that I would be very happy if you continued to work on the piece. I can also play this improvisation new and in multiple verses. But then you would have to send me your singing as a wave? But it would take a while.
Greetings to all Angelica.

Smooth track and vocal delivery. Nice piano work. I like. PEACE. T576 OUT.

Hello Shaman,

yes, now it sounds; and it finds together really beautifully. One listens with pleasure!

Thank you also for your - not necessarily expected by me so - friendly feedback.

Of course, this is not a political forum, but for once - you are Russian, I am German - I would like to say a few sentences about the current German-Russian situation, simply because it is very close to my heart:

It pains me! It pains me much because there has always been a close mental connection between these two countries - even with all historical contradictions - with which I also grew up (and I am not socialized in the GDR, but in West Germany !). The closeness to the USA after WW II was/is mainly political, an emotional closeness like to Russia, however, in my opinion, never developed to the USA, at least not nearly as close.

This is certainly also a major reason for significantly greater political irritation here with us than in other Western countries and it is very difficult to deal with it at all in the current overall circumstances.

I know my contribution probably seems a bit incoherent now, but the current overall situation touches me very much and I really wish from the bottom of my heart that we all get this back in order as it must be ethically and morally obligatory for rational beings.

Kind regards from Germany

Seelengold

hi Alex, i listened early but didn't have time to comment, you have made some good changes, noticeable immediately. the vocal is quieter and more tender but the grumble the bass, or is it a synth, i think you know what i mean, just doesn't go with the vibe of the keys for me, its too rough, the keys are warm and tender. you could warm that up to sit more balanced with the keys.
i admire your work Alex, and always comment, i love your Russian vocal and think you have made massive improvements everywhere. i understand its different from your usually work. i actually like the track you've built around Angelicas keys and the lyric, but hey that's just my opinion and the only thing id change mate. you could try a brass or strings sustain or staccato in its place or run through the synth, just a thought bro, keep it the great work

Brings a new dimension to Angelica's tune, well done Alex!

I'm the king of stupid jokes, love 'em!

Wayne

Great piano piece. Like at a bar. Good one.

Well Shaman...i like it!!!
It could be my simple headphone but i think the volume of your voice is ok but im agree with Seelengold about the gurgling of the liquid. I would leave it away.

Oh no, not really...

I really like to hear Russian, but so right friend piano and vocals here now unfortunately not. The vocals are too loud, should be much more tender.

And don't be angry with me, of course a cliché, I know, but at the gurgling of the liquid is immediately vodka in front of my eyes. And it fits even much less to these cautious sounds.

But what I basically acknowledge: how fast you were with the editing. I wouldn't have been able to do that in such a short time.

Try to get more sensitive vocals. I trust you to do that!

Kind regards

Seelengold