Little bit too dark throughout the way it doesn't change personally I think he needs a switch or Melody with it

nice work TG, you got a decent grimy feel going on, the mix itself is good an an interpretation which is always good to hear of the genre but like others you need to revisit the kick the sound and tone seem flat to me and the only reason i say that is because its too loud and dominates an otherwise decent track, nice too see a new member too, loads of advice here, collabs, and a good bunch, so join in play your part comment reply and make friends you grow more as an artist, trust me i know.

Sounds interesting, but I have the same problem as Rita... I don't know the genre enough to be able to say whether this overdriven kick is really desired or whether it's just not leveled out properly. I would scale it back a bit...
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Micky

Nice work overall. Sound like the bass is clipping a bit (probably in the mastering settings). Not exactly original but it doesn't sound like that is what you were going for anyway.

Hi.
I personally love beats with gunshots and good bass and your beat has everything.
This beat is good but I feel like the kicks are a bit over-modulated. Or is that part of this genre?
Well done.