excellent tune, melody rocks, I love how you change the modal structure on the 3rd and 4th measures of every Stanza/ Ask someone to sing (female vox) and the vocaloids could be nice b-ground, but do create some space by adding a touch of verb or shimmer on it and widen that track (relay). good mix , sounds like an even eq spread

yeah bro don't be shy if you play your part in the community and you keep bringing good work and commenting on others you'll make good friends and people will offer you also, its all about growing and getting better we all join to have fun, your just as important as everyone else put collab request on your next tell them what you want and see how it goes singers like good tracks with rhythm space for verses and a catch change for a good hook chorus line, i might jump on one if its takes me, i admit im not the greatest but im not garbage either, they also tell me im a good song writer probably my strongest skill along with being a big promoter of our platform and wanting more people to join us so come on in Blackfira and show yourself

nice track bro great intro building to that fire bass, tight melody and drum too, its got variation, the vocal could be a few db higher for me but other than that its a good track. and you dont need to use vocoloids there's plenty singers here or real vocals for download just reach out and ask for a collab with someone you like