Description : UPDATE: lengthened, me on TheMilkyMan's dope track of the same name, i just added LEVELS.
it was only 1.57 a bpm of 180. i had to work on it 5 edits, half timed and settled on 96bpm to get 3.32
you've all been giving me positive feedback on my flow of late thankyou, this though i personally consider my best delivery but im sure you'll tell me your thoughts.
switch it up loud, you'll all be bouncing on 18 secs :)
all vocals/harmonies are me apart from the get get part. go check the original
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I don't know enough about the hip hop/rap business to say anything about your rhymes... but you're certainly great at it and definitely unique. But what I can say for sure is that you're getting better at handling music, you're constantly developing. In addition, you always make a good choice when it comes to the tracks that suit you. Keep it up, sir!
Cheers,
Micky
thanks Micky, its amazing how much ive learnt from being a member of the community and the advice and feedback ive been given but one thing for sure is being flamboyant is good for me and is all part of being an artist and keeps the fun in it too :)
And u just continue to be on a tear! Wow man, and u continue to change up ur work and have all kinds of different vibes. Youve grown alot as a music creator in the past couple of years, and it's awesome and inspiring to watch, brother. Well freakn done. -Aaron
thanks bro yeah i had the picture in my head immediately on hearing the track, i knew what i wanted, but i cut a corner and brought it @2.45 lazy, but it just niggled me and yeah i realized the original idea and remixed the track and added 45 secs much happier thanks for the stop
thanks bro, theres plenty processing on my vox im still searching for the best sound, thanks for the comment, im liking what i here from you, you like hard beats keep grinding satdap
Hi Paul, if I could add emotions here it would be a big thumbs up! The song is no longer as dense, the soundstage is better used. It was worth continuing to work on the song! Simply beautiful!
Kind regards, Manuela
thanks Manu, its a lesson learnt for me, put the work in, it took me 15 mins earlier to repeat a cut i already done and add the length 45 secs, the space, it also gives the listener a reset for the following barrage. fast and packed in short burst then more space, there's a couple more things i can look at now its lengths on poinT, i do love the music though
whoooo Paul and CC, cool guys, it’s like we’re on Facebook! I listened to your composition twice, if you had wanted to do it differently, you have more than enough talent to do it differently! I never give criticism on the composition of songs, everyone has their own "know-how" to create...for the sound it's something else when really it's "rotten" I say it and that's not the case here !
Michael
lol, i,m cool Michael, just said my piece, i am just like you, ive never once in my time here criticized anyone, if i can give advice, i will if i like the track if i cant help the track or its not my cup of tea, i dont comment simple as that. yeah if the sound is shocking i would just say its hard to listen but not rude. and yeah if i gave it a couple more hrs i would of had it spaced better, the one thing people overlook is the fact your working with one mp3 you need all the stems to get it the best, everyone should know this, i was also happy with the sound i use stereo separation on each layer but not on my master but i noticed the master was panned hard right separation so i moved it to the middle, thanks for the listen and comment bro
Hello Paul,
a really great and danceable rhythm that immediately flows into your legs. In my opinion, the singing and rhythm harmonize well with each other. So I'm not sure what CC means by his statement.
However, everything is too centralized for my taste. I think if you spaced out the music and vocals better, everything would sound more distinct and clear. I realize this is difficult with finished tracks. However, a lot can be achieved by using an MBST. I also think I hear a slight distortion in your voice. Is that the case? Maybe it's intentional?
Still, good job, and I really understand the challenges you had in creating the song.
Kind regards, Manuela
hi Manuela, thanks for the comment, im opinionated as you know, but im always fair, you know i value constructive critique as much if not more than positive feedback, that helps you grow, positives are nice but not as valuable if you get my meaning. CC comment had no substance, i wont take that from a loop jockey.
i also agree that it is too centralised, to have done it real justice i really needed 3.00-3.05 but, it was too short at 1.57 it was hard to get 2.45 tbf the 3 edits took time to find and seat, also altering the bpm, i didn't real time stretch everything it was edits and processing. i pictured the whole project with more room, i could of then spaced the lala harmony, a relevant part, all the rappers living in la la land :)) and the i would like too and introduce part which i love btw could have sat in between with much more space. everything was relevant to this track thats why it feels as it does @2.45 i used 4 vocals on this only the main was central everything else i panned one side or the other, lots of processing and i used Youlean aftermath pro on my master too this time, im pleased with it, if i was releasing it i would extend it to give it that space but i feel i done more than enough for here, its nice to see somebody can see the obstacles i had to climb over, thankyou Manu
thanks bro its a late night for me 4.30am UK, im on the whiskey, the ghosting hour im at my most creative, total silence.
comments give you inspiration, you can see it, an open dis, its already wrote 20 mins :))
im fucking good bro,
im no loop jockey,
im dimestop, not only im i a singer songwriter i play keys and drums can produce a bit and im funny as fuck
thankyou bro, i told you i wouldn't let you down, i'll be watching out for your tracks my Irish friend, this was fire, thankyou so much for the upload, im sure we will link again... best wishes Paul
What do you mean by 1.57 before you were giving the BPM?oh I'm dumb I see the length duh lol ok I think vocals need to be clearer and lower the background melody.
My honest feedback it doesn't go the Vibe u looking for or trying to go for it doesn't go with this
bro i think your wrong, i value your opinion but its wrong, your American and all sound the same, im English and original with my own identity, YOU dont know what my vibe is bro, lets see what you got no loops, keep it simple two verses and a hook, nah i didnt think so, thats not constructive critique Cinco thats envy, stick to AI
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Description : Everything but the effects i played out. made for them hard spitters def would love to hear what someone with a flow does to this. me and my boy murdered this verbally as i made it enjoy!
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Description : Let me know what you guys think of this beat! I did not make the melodies for this song, LilTiddy created the two loops. I created the drums such as the 808, Kicks, Hi-Hates, Snares and claps. I also Mixed and Mastered the Instrumental.
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Sad Post Malone X xxxtentacion loop Part 1 by LilTiddy
Sad Post Malone X xxxtentacion loop Part 2 by LilTiddy
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Description : I found this old track from 2013. A collab with looperman member Mr1Black.I used RarCharm vocals on the hook.MrBlack sent me his dry vocals and I mixed them in with the track..not the best job on mixing the vocals, or the beat but ,I still like it.
Cheers,
Micky
Very interesting track, great realisation of the conceived idea!
Kind regards, Manuela
Michael
a really great and danceable rhythm that immediately flows into your legs. In my opinion, the singing and rhythm harmonize well with each other. So I'm not sure what CC means by his statement.
However, everything is too centralized for my taste. I think if you spaced out the music and vocals better, everything would sound more distinct and clear. I realize this is difficult with finished tracks. However, a lot can be achieved by using an MBST. I also think I hear a slight distortion in your voice. Is that the case? Maybe it's intentional?
Still, good job, and I really understand the challenges you had in creating the song.
Kind regards, Manuela
i also agree that it is too centralised, to have done it real justice i really needed 3.00-3.05 but, it was too short at 1.57 it was hard to get 2.45 tbf the 3 edits took time to find and seat, also altering the bpm, i didn't real time stretch everything it was edits and processing. i pictured the whole project with more room, i could of then spaced the lala harmony, a relevant part, all the rappers living in la la land :)) and the i would like too and introduce part which i love btw could have sat in between with much more space. everything was relevant to this track thats why it feels as it does @2.45 i used 4 vocals on this only the main was central everything else i panned one side or the other, lots of processing and i used Youlean aftermath pro on my master too this time, im pleased with it, if i was releasing it i would extend it to give it that space but i feel i done more than enough for here, its nice to see somebody can see the obstacles i had to climb over, thankyou Manu
comments give you inspiration, you can see it, an open dis, its already wrote 20 mins :))
im fucking good bro,
im no loop jockey,
im dimestop, not only im i a singer songwriter i play keys and drums can produce a bit and im funny as fuck
My honest feedback it doesn't go the Vibe u looking for or trying to go for it doesn't go with this