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26th Feb 2009 12:22 - 15 years ago
Description : This was one of my first haha

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give DJKave some feedback.

Edge7
Edge7 4th Apr 2009 01:00 - 15 years ago
killer track... nice choice of sounds...
MC
Kurt
Kurt 25th Mar 2009 13:12 - 15 years ago
Haha! I wouldn't know gangsta from a lullabye - and what does it matter? Let the critics put it in a category - you just keep following the muse and don't worry about labels!

What'd I'd like to hear more of is: direction. Lyrics usually provide that - singers give songs meaning. With instrumentals, you need to be going somewhere - and, it's got to be simple enough that listeners can follow.

It's a nice mix - several nice mixes in fact - but what ties them together musically? Why does this section come in front of that one? The ending is abrupt: is that deliberate or did you run out of ideas, space, time? (Don't get me wrong - abrupt endings are cool - and I like this one - but is there a reason for it?)

To me, instrumentals are art. Art is an emotional journey, not just a static space. Yeah, cool beats are awesome - but look around. There are plenty of cool beats. How is yours uniquely yours? Where is it going? What satisfaction does it bring other than "cool beat bro"?

Good sounds, nice overall. You've got some control over your tools and it shows. Produce more! Lots more!

Kurt
audioprojek
audioprojek 21st Mar 2009 14:16 - 15 years ago
This is a hella piece yo! IMO, not gangsta... cross of house and diet-happy-hardcore. Whatever it is, its way cool. The onliest comment I have is that I think your kicks... your bass drum... cheapens the sound. Here you have all this symphonic quality tune blasting all the way though, and your drummer brought a milk crate or something... maybe that's the gangsta bit... somebody stole the drum kit? The drum sounds a little techno... maybe you could add more 'boom'... more depth.
Don't take my word as gospel, 'cause my tunes are all hurtin' and in need of mastering... which brings me to the next bit - you're using Acid as well, and you get some great sounds... I ain't go clue one on how to use the FX in Acid yet. I've been scolded for not following the 70-30 mastering/making rule, and its well earned. No matter, I'm getting off track. Great piece, see what you can do about the drums. (Kurt, Krook and RayKoefoed have all been helpful for me - in case you're looking for some tips.)
DJKave
DJKave replied Unknown
Thanks, how would i get in touch with them?
CelloCubano
CelloCubano 9th Mar 2009 01:24 - 15 years ago
Lol this is nice.. crazy ass synth up in here... this is like Gangsta running for his life... So fast!! But still i liek it man.. keep doin ya thang
tribalunderground
tribalunderground 26th Feb 2009 15:32 - 15 years ago
Nice work man,love the synth and glide the track brings,nice work well done,peace,kj,tribal crew..
ToxicVoltage
ToxicVoltage 26th Feb 2009 15:02 - 15 years ago
I agree with clutz
I wouldn't put this in a gangster category

I think if you made the melodies more "hard" then
i would give it another shot at the gangta thing lol

But i do think the melodies used have potential
to be in a house track or dance

x-_Bri_-x
DJKave
DJKave replied Unknown
Grah, you guys burst the bubble ;)

Thanks for your review ill keep that in mind next time.
Tiltedbeats
Tiltedbeats 26th Feb 2009 12:35 - 15 years ago
I LIKE THIS

lol @ deadcult...

dude this has nice rhythm, and some decent decent melodies!
this is deffs one to be proud of my friend!

cool bro!!! keep this up!
PEACE!
Butcha d-_-b

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