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19th Jul 2024 22:06 - 6 months ago
Description : Feel free to check out the YT video as well - with this track I took a more electronic direction, while trying to keep a bit of a rock spirit :) First song I publish with male vocals and shorter than previous ones....any feedback is appreciated

Comments (11)

If you have time take a listen and give AlanMcLarenProject some feedback.

RichardShekari
RichardShekari 25th Dec 2024 21:19 - 1 month ago
I really enjoy playing games, and the beat has more of a fantasy-style score to it
2Sisters
2Sisters 21st Aug 2024 20:42 - 5 months ago
Well, I understand what you mean. By "balanced" I didn't mean that the vocals should necessarily be loud or stand out, or be the most important element of the song. I think we misunderstood each other there. However, I think that the lyrics should be understandable throughout. If I have to concentrate hard on the vocals to understand the lyrics, I feel overwhelmed when very loud instruments suddenly appear. I hope I was able to explain what I mean better now. But again, this is just my subjective perception and not the be-all and end-all!
Best wishes
Manuela
AlanMcLarenProject
AlanMcLarenProject replied 22nd Aug 2024 - 5 months ago
I see what you mean now, thanks for the clarification, always good to receive these feedbacks to help improve! Alan
2Sisters
2Sisters 20th Aug 2024 21:42 - 5 months ago
Hello Alan,

your song is really great! I just have a few small comments about the mix. To my ears, the balance between vocals and instruments is not quite optimal. Sometimes the voice gets a little lost. It seems like you paid a lot of attention to the instruments and effects. The guitar sounds fantastic and is great to play, but it is a little too dominant in places. Of course, that is just my personal impression, and others could and will feel completely differently.
Best wishes
Manuela
AlanMcLarenProject
AlanMcLarenProject replied 21st Aug 2024 - 5 months ago
Hi Manuela, thanks for the constructive feedback, I appreciate it. Like on other tracks, found it tricky to balance everything, in this specific song I've realised the effect (on the left channel) sounds too loud on certain speakers but fine on others. The volume of the vocals would benefit from some improvement although I am one of those who doesn't like the vocals to stand out too much compared to the instruments, might have taken the concept too far though :D
PatrickFox
PatrickFox 20th Aug 2024 14:19 - 5 months ago
I really do like this... It gives me a vibe of The X-Files, Twin Peaks.
Love guitar and the lyrics. Vocals were on point. Well done.
AlanMcLarenProject
AlanMcLarenProject replied 22nd Aug 2024 - 5 months ago
Thanks a lot Patrick, didn't think about X-Files and Twin Peaks but I like that it gives that type of vibe :)
VintageNights
VintageNights 20th Aug 2024 11:27 - 5 months ago
Hello Alan - Great guitar work here - got splashes of echo and the bunnymen and flock of seagull feel wehn I listened. Love that you have written lyrics. My only suggestion would be to deepen and beef up your vocal to get that angst across. Good work. KayOS at VintageNights
AlanMcLarenProject
AlanMcLarenProject replied 20th Aug 2024 - 5 months ago
Hi Kay, thanks for listening and for the technical suggestion, also interesting to read about these references, never listened to those bands, I'll take a look :) Alan
ValveDriver
ValveDriver 17th Aug 2024 00:23 - 5 months ago
Alan, what's happnin'?

I dig this. It's kind of dark and groovy. It's got a good vibe to it.

I like to mix synths with traditional instruments in my work as well, so, I really liked the way you incorporated them in yours.

I think, however, the drums could have been a bit louder in the mix. They're kind of buried in the background, and hard to hear in some spots. Other than that, it sounds good.

Good work. Keep it up.
Take care.
V.
AlanMcLarenProject
AlanMcLarenProject replied 17th Aug 2024 - 5 months ago
Hello, thanks for stopping by and for the useful feedback, really appreciate it!
Have a good weekend
Alan
SteveLewis
SteveLewis 28th Jul 2024 09:53 - 6 months ago
Indeed the guitars intro pulls into the song well, thought it was a few stoo long tho. Bass worked great and lyrics told a relatable tale.
AlanMcLarenProject
AlanMcLarenProject replied 16th Aug 2024 - 5 months ago
Thank you for the feedback Steve!
dimestop
dimestop 24th Jul 2024 01:03 - 6 months ago
nice intro guitar and great vocal, its tight, nice tone, some great sounds like that jews harp cross sort, nice melody tones and a relaxed drum track, the bass is fire, great work mate nice listen
AlanMcLarenProject
AlanMcLarenProject replied 24th Jul 2024 - 6 months ago
Thanks a lot for the nice feedback, glad to hear you enjoyed it :)
Loveis777
Loveis777 20th Jul 2024 10:01 - 6 months ago
The track has a great mood and a wonderful vibe!
AlanMcLarenProject
AlanMcLarenProject replied 21st Jul 2024 - 6 months ago
Thanks a lot for listening and for the nice comment!
lofizzer
lofizzer 20th Jul 2024 01:11 - 6 months ago
nice sound guit melody when start your song this is captive immediatly my attention interesting abd i like the many sound electronic ..
AlanMcLarenProject
AlanMcLarenProject replied 21st Jul 2024 - 6 months ago
Thanks a lot for listening!
Nonube
Nonube 20th Jul 2024 00:02 - 6 months ago
The opening guitar riff pulls us gently into the song with waves of reverb and there is a electro buzz like a cross between a didge and a mouth harp setting up some cross rhythm. And then a very sweet vocal, and such complementary melodic and warm arps, builds with some seriously fine hooks. Electro pop bliss happening here. Very nice structure too - a real hit.
AlanMcLarenProject
AlanMcLarenProject replied 21st Jul 2024 - 6 months ago
Thanks a lot for the nice comment, I enjoyed reading your analysis of the song, glad you like it :)

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