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1st Mar 2009 02:56 - 16 years ago
Description : This poem was inspired by a friend of mine who described lying under a tree and seeing the sky through the swaying branches. She was able to imagine being under water and looking up at the surface. She was in South America at the time. I used this mental image to feel close to her. It is me, a mic, and my brother's keyboard (recorded analog), and some nature FX. Recorded using digi002 rack and protools.

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thyroid
thyroid 2nd May 2011 10:02 - 13 years ago
what a great great track. This is an abosulte superb track that gives you the high atmospheres that this track deserves.
Great job
xXSecretScienceXx
xXSecretScienceXx 1st Jul 2010 03:17 - 14 years ago
"claps hands"

great job
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 11th Apr 2010 16:48 - 14 years ago
Wow this sends chills up and down my spine! I love a good spoken word track, and this one doesn't disappoint! You've done a great job capturing a moment with your poetry, you should be proud! I wish this was available for download! Oh well, it's definitely getting faved though! Thanks for sharing this great piece!
Pwnone
Pwnone 9th Mar 2009 08:11 - 16 years ago
uuuuuwwwwwwweeeeeee!!!
im lovin it kid..
aahh, i havent heard shit like this in so long.
if you dont mind, i think i wana turn this to a song with some girl singing that first line you had.

under a tree, i dreamed a dreamers dream.
wooh!

i also love the way you ended the vocals. lovely!
jonzie008
jonzie008 replied Unknown
Thanks for the kind response. I will admit it came as a pleasant surprise to me. I'm glad you are able to find some inspirtation through my fumblings. I would be curious to hear what you create. Take it and run with it.
toddj
toddj 3rd Mar 2009 05:05 - 16 years ago
This is another song I haven't heard in a long while. I like the distance that the piano and your spoken words seem to have from the listener. It kind of conveys the distance you had from your friend. Very nice ambient sounds and nice bit of poetry.

Peace,
Toddj

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