hot man reminds me of the Lonely loner although the snare intro to the chorus is a little off beat its still hot i guess your not finished id also add another drum pattern like a faster drum pattern and alternate from both good job man keep it up

THIS IS A GOOD CATCHY BEAT MAN, I DUNNO IF YOUR DONE WITH IT YET BUT I RECCOMEND TURN THE CLAP DOWN A BIT AND THE BASS LEVEL IS DISTORTED AND THEN IT WOULD BE FIRE, AND MAYBE ADD ANOTHER LEAD OR SUMTHIN DURIN A TRANSITION, JUST MY OPINION BUT PRETTY SOLID BEAT KEEP IT UP!!!
-T R I S-

I think it's good but the claps kind of overwhelm your main loop
and the bass could be turned down a bit
im not sure if youd be better off making the main loop louder, its up to you

Aite the loops nice.... The Claps too loud and out.... Ouch!!! That bass needs to be turned down alot... The snare roll was a little bit off. The kick should be double layered in my opinion as well. But considerin ur jus startin out its a nice attempt... keep workin at it man

this has a good feel to dogg off the Chain keep up the good work reallt like the in tha club feel Jus need to brush up a little on your in and out on the drums the bass bangs almost to much this can be a killa You should let yo boy hit it up with some lyics let me know my email on my profile page God Bless

Mahloo13 is right about the levels. You're clipping a lot when the bass comes in. I would say just bring the master level down.

Also, those handclaps are too out front in the mix, and I'm not quite feeling that snare fill. It might just be a style that I'm not familiar with. I have never been all that into the TR808 and similar, so if it's what you were shooting for, then you are probably right.

I also like the idea of introducing some variation, maybe developing the thing harmonically.

Still, a nifty piece.