Description : HIP-HOP TRACK
Check this joint right here, my latest track, thanks to the amazing beat from N18th never fails, pretty hard to make a bad track on one of his beats, lol...
Please Review!!!
ayo spit, real talk...i'm upset that i'm just now finding you on looperman...you really don't know how long i thought i was going to wait to find someone who ACTUALLY SPITS REAL HIP-HOP...keep up the MIND BLOWING work...one hundred...p.s. if you would be so humbled to tear one of my tracks APART...take your pick son
aHey what up bro!!! glad u diggin this shiz, werd i use mac, lol i love mac, i was trained on it at school so since i been hooked... recorded this in pro-tools through the m-box... glad u enjoyed it man!!!
That would be the boy genius himself, none other then N18Th, peep his ish!! he commented on this a lil wayz down the page... Thanks for listening man!!
Thanks for the review man!! But yhea, its my other homie N18Th that made this monster beat, and when i heard it this is what i wrote to it, glad u like it tho!!
had to throw the headphones on 4 this 1 and listen again. actually listened a few times to try and find places for improvement. this is a tight track. flow is on point and matches the beat style perfectly. i would like to have had a "wrap up" or conclusion so to speak, in the 3rd verse but what u did works. the lyrics in the chorus r sick, u need to find a way to make that stand out a bit more. overall this shit is really good man. i mean, like make somethin move good.
Werd thanks for that Bolo, i was really looking for that second opinion in the mix on this one... I dunno, i would have to agree, i need to umph the hook a lil more, and i stiiill dont really like my mix on the bridge, i thought my voice sounded diff there, so what i did for mix was double and pan so its stereo, but then have both those tracks automating the pan back and forth in opposites, so the voices are switchin from ear to ear i think 4 times per one loop of bridge... I think this sound a lil out there compared to the rest of the track and even kinda kill the emo at the end of third V... Definatly will remix for the mixtape im working on, but probably wont pst that version... Thanks again for feedback really appreciate it, Oh and N18Th wanna have a re-mix of this track with me and a couple other cats, could b your chance to get on!?!? Holla at N18Th bout that tho cauz he's setting it up...
dmn spit!!!!!!!! FIRE!!!!!!!! im diggn da lyrics 4 sure homie u damn sure did dat n18thbeat justice i aint gone lie bour dat!!!!! gud ish keep em cumin homie!!! oh yea man wats up wit da official collab??? i knw u said slow down but i cant help it its 2 much talent on dis site 4 me 2 do dat lmfao
Hahahaha, i hear you man, i wiiiish i could keep up, but i got to be honest with myself, if i tried working with all the artists i like on this site (specially at once) then i would stress myself out=shitty tracks :(, so i been goin slow but steady :P but werd Thezerit droped that line below on us three +1 jumping on sum sum, i'd be down for that!!!!
OOOOHHHH, SSSSHHHITTTT, brother, you know i'm heavy into dark, dark sounds, but, man, this one blew my mind....spitshine at his best....man, i luv your beats AND i luv your raps, not many producers who can give us a good spit, too!!! It tastes a little kanye-west-like, well-picked beatz, i really like the organ....well, over all, another hot spitshine-shit....don`t need to say, you touch my soul with your music.....FAMILY, and I'm proud of it!!! I need more of this shit....crazy....hey, you'd like to send me an acapella, so i can try to make a remix?
Peace, bro, and greetings to your girl!!!
Dizzy
Hey what up bro! Thanks for swinging by for the listen and the review!! Appreciate it as alwayz :P, for sure man, i'll do that for you, if not today then soon, this week, but ima try to get around to it today... just finished a new beat about to upload..
Oh and when i bounce that acapella i'll just upload it on here, I know a couple other members that would probably appreacite that...
Damn! This is a killer flow and a N18th beat, perfection. Then the line towards the end "and me I got no five mics, only this one track and still I give it my life", that was just the icing on the whole track. Just an amazing track and flow. As far as the mix, I think more a personal preference would be to raise the vocals a few db. Not too much that it over shadows the beat. Other than that, I loved all the verses SpitShine. Respect for both you guys. Hope to see another collab in the future.
Finally some input on the mix, lol, thank you.. yhea i'm def going to re-mix this if i do somthing with, glad thats all that seems off to you, an easy fix... I guess i was just psyching myself out, we are our own worst critics are'nt we... Thank you for the review..
WHEW!!!! this is dope as hell! Man you got sick ass sound, makes me want to rap. Keep it up man, very nice track, I really want to get somebody on this track with you, maybe like tizzle, estae, or KMY would be Ill, like a remix, keep it up man, once again you did it justice, peace
N18th
Yhea man im game for a remix of this for show!!! What'd you have in mind?? I'll let you set it up :P, Im just glad you like, and thanks for the opportunity... Also would you mind if i used this version on a mixtape with all beat credits going to you of course??? Alot of cats round canada could get a chance to hear your ishh.. Lemme know...
thanks for the review wezy!! yhea i started rappin before i statred makin beats lol... should read me bio on my page and went off and spilled my beans on me+music.
Thats also me on 2 other tracks i have up, "Can't Forget FT.DustHill"
and
"Breathe"
Stay good man hope work is goin well..
SpitShine
Hey whats up homie!!! Thanks for the review!!!! Im glad you enjoyed it!!! i got a myspace but to be honest i never go on there no more... well rarely i should say, so you got the heads up on that, pretty much the only place you can hear my ish online right now is here... but here it is anywayz :P
Feelin this track for sure......nice way to utilize the beat with the flow, great change ups while providing awesome aesthetics with the beat. Line on the final verse is sick and defines your style :"dont have five mics just this one track but i give it me whole life" grimmy as f@*k, cool laid back track and n18th has the dopest ish.
stay up
Thanks for the review!!! Yhea, i knida went off the reg flow i developed for this beat on that third verse, try n push a lil more in!!! Im happy ou enjoyed it!!
Thanks Again!!!
SpitShine
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this shit was crazy fire. nice ass flow with the rhymes to go.
damn, u need to rap some more.
i got it, i got it.... you and me on any fucking beat!
WE MUST!!! Spit Shine and Nabbee Zooo, it screams BANGA!! lol
get at me duuude..docpone@gmail.com
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Peace, bro, and greetings to your girl!!!
Dizzy
Oh and when i bounce that acapella i'll just upload it on here, I know a couple other members that would probably appreacite that...
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Thanks Again
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Thats also me on 2 other tracks i have up, "Can't Forget FT.DustHill"
and
"Breathe"
Stay good man hope work is goin well..
SpitShine
www.mypsace.com/whitepeaksproductions
Thanks again!!
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stay up
Thanks Again!!!
SpitShine