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5th Jun 2009 18:09 - 15 years ago
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Description : This is the first vocal song i have ever written and sang in.
Guitar and vocals are by me.
UPDATE: I recently re recorded it and made some changes...If you think its worse then i can put the origional back up :p
Hope you enjoy it!

Comments (19)

If you have time take a listen and give ChrisHall some feedback.

FarishaMusic
FarishaMusic 25th Nov 2010 21:07 - 14 years ago
love it!!! love the vocals too, could totally see it on a tv show soundtrack :D
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
You could!? Woah! Thank you!!!! :)

Thanks for taking the time to listen and review!!

Chris
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 2nd Mar 2010 13:41 - 14 years ago
I really like this, the quality is great, I loved this song the first time I heard it, and its just a great song, forgot about it, but I'm sure I will be back to listen again and again. I love your work, I love acoustic music, for some reason when I record a song I never keep it simple (I need to), it really is my favorite style, you have a great overall talent, great guitar playing, singing, and songwriting, I'm a huge fan, I think you are probably my favorite artist on here, and my wife always likes your tracks when I have her listen. Keep it up man, I look forward to hearing more from you, maybe we can collab sometime?
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
arghh dude...this is gonna sound soo gay but you made me all embaressed when i read this! If you want any of my songs just ask me dude and i will gladly email them over for you!
I can't believe you show your wife!
I would love to colab sometime man!
Email me and i will send you my musiccc...add me on msn or facebook if you like too :)

Thank you dude!...i really do love all your comments! =D

Chris
JohnnyHunter
JohnnyHunter 5th Jan 2010 20:11 - 14 years ago
Really really nice song. Enjoyed all the way through. Maybe its just my headphones but your voice could be a little louder. Maybe spread the voice out a little bit and give the guitar room, if you know what i mean. Thanks for uploading this. Gonna Fav it
Johnny
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
I need to re record this again man...i need to get on it! haha I know what you mean about spreading it out a little more and stoof i can hear it too..but i can just never get to motivation to change it haha :p

Thanks for the review buddy :) you should listen to my covers...the vocals are a little better on them :)

Cheers dude!

Chris
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 14th Dec 2009 16:59 - 15 years ago
Man that voice is a lady killer, nice and soothing, great job and don't worry about your voice at all it is very good, focus on recording it well which is the only challenge you should have with that voice. Nice job
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
aww cheers man!! i dunno about it being a lady killer haha :p

Thanks for listening and the reviewwwww =D

Chris
DJ_Green
DJ_Green 18th Oct 2009 19:42 - 15 years ago
Awesome guitar picking, I couldn't do it if my life depended on it. You've got a really good voice too, keep it up dude.
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
Hey man thanks for the compliments!!!!..the picking aint too hard..im sure with a little practice you can make it happen ;)

You should listen to counting clouds too man..see if you like it :)

Thanks for the listen and review

Chris
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 14th Sep 2009 20:44 - 15 years ago
I just love this track!Your arpeggios are very very nice and I think your voice perfectly complement your guitar playing.Faved!
Cheers
French Kid
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
Aww thanks man =D

It takes me sooo long to write a song and be happy with it..but im happy with this one :)

Thanks for a real nice review buddy!! Thanks for listening too

Chris
WeLiveLoud
WeLiveLoud 28th Aug 2009 23:41 - 15 years ago
Loving every minute of this. Reminds me of something like Coldplay But so much more you own! You should be famous!
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
I dont wanna be famous with singing songs...coz i write them for a girl..and if everyone has them..then the songs sorta aint hers anymore...pluss...being famous is a scary thought! haha

dude if you like this you should check out counting clouds. i think its better!

Thanks for a really uplifting review man!

Chris
Randall822
Randall822 19th Aug 2009 16:59 - 15 years ago
Hi Chris,

Getting around to give you a proper review back from the recent rock tune you reviewed of mine.

Nice tune here. I like the finger picking style of the acoustic guitar. I own a Mitchell myself. Mostly heard on my country tunes.

I like all the playing, and your vocals are pretty good I think. You seem to have a soft voice. I don't sing myself, so I can't give any pointers that way.
Great job,
Randy
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
Hey randall im not a singer either...im a guitarist....but not a singer hahah

I remember you saying about your mitchell a few weeks ago..pretty guitars :)

I tried to sing it soft coz i wrote this for a girl..so i wanted to come across as warm and soft haha...i think it worked :)

Thanks for taking the time to listen and thank you for the review randall!

Chris
WhiteSands
WhiteSands 8th Aug 2009 07:46 - 15 years ago
For not being a singer you did real well. Good melody on the guitar and cool lyrics.
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
Hey bud. Thanks for your kind words

Cheers for listening and reviewing

Chris
BigPete
BigPete 7th Jul 2009 00:02 - 15 years ago
you know how I feel about this track, its already my fav, a bit hawaian, lol, just pulling your leg, you have a beautiful voice, no problems getting girls with a singing voice like this, and really cool girls I bet, lol. I will never get sick of this track, with SobStory Better Way my 2 favorite complete tracks of the month, and you have this vote locked in, I know both tracks are yours but this one is my fav.
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
I really tried to move away from that Hawaiian feel...i thought i did..but the fact that you can still hear it upsets me greatly :(..haha :p
My voice soo does not get me girls haha..i used a program to put myself in tune...BUT DONT TELL ANYONE!...it also took like a thousand takes...DONT TELL ANYONE THAT TOO!!!
Thanks for the review and vote buddy :)
p.s...me and sobstory are doing a colab in about a week haha

Cheers

Chris
elleseabird
elleseabird 26th Jun 2009 17:20 - 15 years ago
Okay, so here am, I really enjoyed it. Your voice is really soothing and melancholy all at once ( I say that as a compliment) I like how a musician can really put you in the mood he/she wants you to be in and this song really put me in a forlorn romantic kinda of mood. This is the style of stuff I see on your album!!!! Maybe we could sing and write something like this together.
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
ye ok..im gonna write something now and i will send it over within the hour :p..no vocals just guitar for now :p

Thanks for the comment too :)

Chris
MEDICALMARIJUANA
MEDICALMARIJUANA 22nd Jun 2009 03:08 - 15 years ago
This is good bro... keep singing, folk guitar style pushes the mood. Peace.... and may you be the winner of this contest.
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
haha thanks for the support buddy and thanks for taking time out of your day to leave a comment and listen!

Chris
victormusic01x
victormusic01x 20th Jun 2009 18:39 - 15 years ago
yeah buddy, you and Sobstory are definitely pushing the envelope with your songs..I wouldn't change a thing...the guitar makes me miss Michael Hedges even more...faving this man and want to hear more for sure..
thanks for posting this track guy!

victormusic01x..in the nyC...feeling a deep song from the heart

80)
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
dude iv never heard of that guy but i must say i do like his stoof!

my niece is coming over tomorrow to make a song...so hopefully it will turn out ok...gonna try and write it and at liest some of it recorded tomorrow.

sobstorys music is pretty ace! i really want to write a scoutic song for him to sing over...or even a rock on..its just getting the motivation to get off my arse and make a song :p

anyway...massive rant over..thanks for the review man! cheers

Chris
theonetruebrew
theonetruebrew 20th Jun 2009 06:03 - 15 years ago
what the hell man...i have no idea what you saw in me when you can do this... O: this is fantastic!! like...this is REALLY good...would you mind emailing me that track?

theonetruebrew@gmail.com if you dont remember

thats so good...beautiful and complex guitar...but in such a simply and understandable way...and the vocals are just right...wow man...im truly moved.
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
Matt your songs are awesome! way better than what i can do! ofc i will send it..i got your email saved lol :p im gonns start writing more..i have a song im writing with my niece...shes a wicked singer so hopefully it will be good :p
I friggin love that you like it man!
i will get the song sent over now.
thanks for taking time to listen to the track Matt and thanks for a brill review!

Chris
sobstory
sobstory 14th Jun 2009 18:46 - 15 years ago
As one of the others said "Don't try to change a thing" it works on all the right levels. From someone that is mainly a vocalist, I think this track is very well done.
Pease,
Sob Story
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
wooo that means a lot especially coming from a vocalist!
you should upload some tracks buddy..looking forward to hearing what sorta stuff you do!

Chris
Tatjanna
Tatjanna 13th Jun 2009 19:59 - 15 years ago
Wow, Bad voice? No way! It's a fresh original sound! I totally like it!
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
haha thanks for the review! im glad you like it..you should upload some of your material so i can have a listen! :p

Chris
n0mad23
n0mad23 7th Jun 2009 04:06 - 15 years ago
You've got a great voice, Mate - put your worries away. The vocals and guitar work really well together throughout this. There were moments I actually thought about EARLY Pink Floyd and some of the acoustic arrangements (this is meant as a compliment). There's something really compelling about how your voice chases the guitar's melody - especially since there's a sincerity in your voice. More coming? Please?
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
Im gonna have plenty of time to write more music over the summer so i will try and write some more vocal songs and other songs too..thanks for the confidence boost man! means a lot =D

Chris
BigPete
BigPete 6th Jun 2009 05:06 - 15 years ago
a tip on your vocals, don't f!!!!ng mess with them, they sound perfect, your voice is perfect for your sound, great guitar work, great melody, straight to fav, this is pure gold that deserve a place in the limelight, hell I want your voice on one of my tracks, you have a new fan, Peace Love and Freedom to use the voice we are born with.
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
WOW! that means a lot thanks man!...i would love to sing on one of your tracks :p im not a singer so don't expect much lol thanks for a wicked review..made me feel really good about my singing thanks =D

Chris
BigJoWezy
BigJoWezy 5th Jun 2009 19:26 - 15 years ago
sounds good it's the only comp track i've listened to but its real good. good luck GOD BLESS!!!
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown
thanks buddy I think il need it haha :p

Thanks for a positive review

Chris

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