Almost rave like in its overall feel, i started enjoying this once it dropped in. Has a sort of hip-hop / rap feel with the samples as well. But Chud is right. I too am learning that although i can make a tune and label it dubstep and i like it, it doesn't truly live up to the genre just because i put a snare on the 3rd...there are just some things you should try and achieve in ur dubstep. I am a fine one to speak like - but with some work this could be a wicked dubstep tune. Follow Chud's advice and this'll be sick.

Hmm i liked this track alot, Its got some nice melodies in there and they work well at the begining. However I could tell instantly it was made in Reason, it just has that kinda sound to it i think. And thats something that I think you should try and get rid of, although I dont really know how to do that to be honest.

The drum beats not amazingly to my taste, but it stands out well, its not to muffled or anything like that. The main synth is nice. It might be nice to try and automate it slightly a bit more, just make it fast and then slow, as traditional dubstep dictates. It just makes it slightly more interesting than listening to an LFO constantly on 1/8 or somthing like that.

But good work all the same :)