this is great. I have set loads of poems and short stories to music. and I would love to do a remix of this. love this track great work.

Dave,

This is simply brilliant. I love the innocence of the vocals and your respectful treatment of them. This is wonderful from start to finish. It brought back memories of when my daughters were that age.

Thanks for that.

And thanks to your niece as well.

Bear

man its somthing about this song its creates a mental image of sea so clear and the girl's voice is innocent and sharp,wonder what it was like EQ'ing this track and wokring on the second.

great song once again.

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Wow, this is quite the track. Vanessa's voice is perfect over what is a great exemplar of a mystical backing track.

Awesome job you two.

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All The Best To You And Yours For The New Year, My Friend
May It Be Your Best Year Ever

John

Easily the best song on Looperman, amazing production, cute voice, reminds me of the Final Fantasy: Advent Children Movie, during a scene where a little girl speaks about the Life Stream, or the worlds Life Stream, definitely if you haven't looked at it you should, if she makes any more music will you be uploading it? I' be very grateful to hear it from here.
Truly amazing, well done to her and you, seems like music is in the family eh? :)

Soligen

wow, thats a cool concept you have on this one, i will have to play this for my daughter and see what she thinks. Very imaginative piece.

Good one.

Peace...

What do you want I write, it's so...genious.
Introducing your niece's voice is original and brings some nice atmosphere. Nice piece !

Hey i wanted to say ur songs gave me inspration,as a screenwriter i decided to get rid of my no-sleeves ego and become who u see today.

this track is a perfect example of what can happen when unite cinamatic energy with music(altough this is a spoken word track)

so cheers to u planet maybe we can work on a ambient track together someday.

PEACE LOVE AND SCREENPLAYS FOREVER

This is great man!!I have to play this for my dauther! very creative! big time! love it!

Bm;)

Planet

man this is out of this world, first listen I was having breaks in the track, but thought would give it another go, must have been the internet playing up, wow mate this is eerie but so great listening in the same time, your niece has a brilliant voice for this type of track and can see her having a future in spoken word for sure, sensational track matey, bye the way great to see another fellow Aussie here, even if he is living in Melb lol seriously great track, thank you for you and your niece for sharing your talents, fav'd...Peace Planet...Estefano....

Very nice indeed Planet. Your nieces' voice sounds perfect with the also perfect warm tones of the guitar and strings/pads. And I agree with nonesensesystem's last comment :) keep up the great work.

the ebb and flow of this piece is mesmorizing...it almost immediately takes you out into the middle of the sea, to bobwith the waves in a tiny vessel. its only the certainty of her voice that reassures you you wont capsize...
this is such a neat piece. the production value is out of this world. ive never heard levels so beautifully balanced. kudos to both of you. cant wait to hear more of your work!

did you upload any of these vocals raw? it would be kinda refreshing to work with stuff like this instead of lil thugs that have cheap mic recordings of how much weed they smoke

all from an 11yr old? oh man tell her to keep it up! she will be perfecting epic audio landscapes in no time. this is trippy in such a great way

Aaaahhhh! From the mouths of babes.

What an interestingly sweet composition. Vanessa did a great job, very articulate and well spoken. Nicely put together.

Wayne

Vanessa is blessed within the planet gene pool.....great synergy between her voice and your music.....I hear there is going to be hail in Melb for tomorrows AFL final :(
Great work
Trax

A truly gorgeous piece of work. Lovely jaco-esque harmonics and ambient backdrops remeniscent of Steve Hillage's work on "Green", a rare treat and definately one for the favorites list - well done.

very inspiring track, call me impressed, i have been trying forever and a day to get my kids involved in this but they have no interest... love the track,,, great job...

Very relaxing track...yet kinda haunting at the same time. Very beautiful piece of work. I would say I'm impressed, but I've pretty much come to expect greatness from you. Well done!

new avatar aside, you have left me speachless. Being blue green color blind music has always been my pallet. You inspire! Thank you for being totally out of this world.
Your humble servant!
me, neil

i really love your style its so amazing if u get a chance check out my trax and let me know what you think

Man so touching and beautiful, and there is a lot of jammin happening behing but never too much, very respectful mix of music and word, you had me when you did your first hatmonics and then the angel voice of your daughter, great human piece of art, for the memorie of mankind. Peace Love and Freedom sir.

nicely done! your niece definatley should pursue spoken word. the piece is very relaxing and intellectual, something i would expect from someone twice her age. nice instrumental also, very original and fits the piece well. Good work to both of you, can't wait to hear more!

This is an inspiring piece! I've been wanting to do some spoken word lately too, so it's good to hear something like this. This track definitely feels like childlike wonder. Great work! Thanks for sharing!

From the mouths of babe, aye? My youngest is about to turn 11, and I love watching her imagination at play.

Vanessa has some lines here that are so poetic, I had to backtrack and hear them immediately again. Glad you're obviously fostering the creativity in the family youth.

How subversive.

ahh

I wrote a long review but I think my computer is going haywire!

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Give Vanessa a hug.

This was haunting, peculiar, mythological, dreamy and amazing.

Amazing work.
Amazing.
Love your style
and
apparently your kin's style too
lol