Maybe - FACTOR

Nice one. You've got a good sense of rhythm, and your melodies weave into it really well. Very danceable track. (Do you ever use the mbira or other traditional instruments in your recordings? I'll have to check out your other stuff.) Cheers.

This tracks remind me a Timbaland production for Justin Timberlake...

I enjoyed listening to your track, I wish I was good with vocals myself I would def have had a go at this track it would be interesting to hear what anyone comes up with.
Drop me a link if anyone lays down some good vocals.
Nice One Mate
Regards
Krook

Hiya dude.

Nice track, the melodies are really great and all work really well together.

The only things i would probly change is, the synth pad that starts the track off is a little too weak to be the first thing you hear in the track. try making another copy of the pad and push it forward or back a couple of milli-seconds. Pan them a little left and right to create some stereo width and put a little bit of mild flange or chorus on them, bounce off a copy of them and add some distortion to mash them up. cut everything below about 300hz on the ditorted version and put them low in the mix below the others.

Also the kik drum could use a bit of work. try layering up some samples from any of the vengence sound collections, i was also taught a wicked little trick from someone right here on looperman, and that is to layer a quickly enveloped closed hi-hat over the kik low in the mix to help it cut through. if you dont have any of the vengence collections try sampleing a clean kik from Taio Cruz as he does alot of similer stuff to this track and it should fit in well.

Wicked track tho dude and with a couple of changes here n there its gonna be fire :)

This is some good stuff, might make a few things to it and try some lyrics over it if thats ok?

This is pretty good, definitely two thumbs up