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21st Dec 2007 19:20 - 17 years ago
Description : I sang this with 2 partially collapsed lungs. So I am a little shakey. I figured I could get an honest opinion of what people think of this song here in Looperman. This song is about my wife and new baby that hasn't been born yet. I can't wait for the new edition to the family. Sometimes my wife doesn't think I am excited enough, and that is why I say "can't you see"

Bossle'

Comments (10)

If you have time take a listen and give Resist_Agony some feedback.

guitarguy316
guitarguy316 9th Aug 2008 04:35 - 16 years ago
I agree with spyzuk there a little on the bowie style. I thought this song was very well done; especially with your health in mind. There's always going to be "things you could have done" but never mind that, for its raw talent, I give it a 10 dude!
phasturbo
phasturbo 18th Apr 2008 12:36 - 16 years ago
You're talented man!! Did you use samples or did you play the synth yourself? Drum samples? Nice job dude, really!! Kinda reminds me of that Royksopp tune they use in those Geico "caveman" commercials here in the States, real mellow.
Resist_Agony
Resist_Agony replied Unknown
I actually played all the boards. However I did use a drum loop, I have to this point only used loops for drums. I appreciate the great review. Thank you.
Aust
Aust 7th Feb 2008 06:06 - 17 years ago
The vocals to me don't sound bad and as for the instrumental of the song well that is just great.
blacktiger
blacktiger 4th Feb 2008 22:24 - 17 years ago
Excellent work. This is the very first song I heard on this site (if all the songs are like this, then we have a goldmine here)! Re: the vocals: it's difficult to push hard enough to get up to pitch, but you work it to good effect; it's very sincere. Nice vocal harmonies as well.
Resist_Agony
Resist_Agony replied Unknown
Thank you! I appreciate the kind words.
spyzuk
spyzuk 4th Feb 2008 05:28 - 17 years ago
YOR STUFF REMINDS ME OF BOWIE ALOT I LIKE IT MAN !
GameboiX
GameboiX 2nd Feb 2008 23:39 - 17 years ago
I love the synths in this really great track too bad your wife doesnt know that its for her yet =/ keep up the good work =)
fiery
fiery 2nd Feb 2008 08:08 - 17 years ago
I think if you sound this good with collapsed lungs you're a step ahead of a lot of vocalists who get played in HIGH rotation. I love your voice, it has a warm earthy feel. First off, I LOVE the arrangement and lyrics of this... and I third the demo opinion. This is awesome... I bet your wife is proud. Lisa
Resist_Agony
Resist_Agony replied Unknown
My wife doesnt even know this is about her and the baby. I let her listen to it when I did it and all she said was "not your best work". So, I havent told her yet.
fiend
fiend 27th Jan 2008 01:11 - 17 years ago
Wow I wish i could sing half this good with 2 good lungs. I'd have to have 2 agree with saint DEMO MAN DEMO! That is if the little lady doesn't mind! But she did invite it - lol..
stay up B - Peace and Music - Trey
rei4real
rei4real 26th Jan 2008 23:38 - 17 years ago
first: that's a very very beautiful track!!!
nothing to criticize about the vocals ....
but the bassline: it consists of A-C#-G, but for my ears it should be A-C-G, correct me if I'm wrong ...
I think this would be much better, and with that change I would like to try to add some guitars if you don't mind .... just hit me up if that would be ok ...
about the synths everything has been said before: perfect!!!
it's really a great song!!!

peace, rei
(and thx for the kind rev ...)
SaintAvithe
SaintAvithe 27th Dec 2007 01:46 - 17 years ago
The synths are sooooooooooo warm. I actually love the song, including the vocals, theyre better than any 'artist' weve got in the fucking uk.

You should send this out in a demo man.

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