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29th Dec 2007 21:12 - 17 years ago
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Description : This was my second song done with Acid Pro 6, and on a totally different vibe than Goodbye was. The range in my taste in music shows in my songwriting I guess. I had some mixing issues with my vocals on this one so I wasn't totally happy with it, but I lost the project pieces etc in a reinstall (yes Lisa, back your s*** up). Let me know what you think anyway... any advice would be welcomed.

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If you have time take a listen and give fiery some feedback.

Sounstar
Sounstar 8th Mar 2008 11:53 - 17 years ago
you be doing your thang , Hell I may wanna send you a track . I like what you doing.
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Hey I am up for collabs, I just need to be choosy so I don't end up chipmunked again lol. THanks for listening, glad you liked it! ~Lisa
ronman5000
ronman5000 25th Feb 2008 19:19 - 17 years ago
I feel like I had a massage after listening to that. Nice job. Beautiful voice.
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Hehe interesting way of putting it :) Thanks for listening!
MonsieurDongBag
MonsieurDongBag 21st Feb 2008 14:09 - 17 years ago
I am a sucker for drums and you did em up well here, especially the congas in the back.
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks very much :) I have a tendency to layer drums.. I'm only just learning to do my own (total drum theory dumbass here) but even when I use loops I like putting down more than one. Thanks for listening! :) ~Lisa
Sector7even
Sector7even 14th Feb 2008 14:38 - 17 years ago
...ummm..I know I already posted a review..

but...

can I get an autograph?

..no really..lol

gizz.
ps-downloading in 3..2..1
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Haha you're too funny ;) I'm glad you liked this gizz :) Autograph eh? Hang on let me fire up paint! x
Gsusfrk
Gsusfrk 3rd Feb 2008 18:58 - 17 years ago
compress everything, its makes everything have its own seperate loudness, but it does sound nice, got a relaxing peacefull mood, your voice is great! Wonderufl work :>)
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks :) This was my second track, I really had NO clue what I was doing aside from trying to create a tune that I could be inspired by. Still MUCH to learn, I appreciate any advice I can get... thanks! Lisa
SpAzz
SpAzz 30th Jan 2008 03:44 - 17 years ago
Love it, cant sayanything else really... makes me wanna ponder life and look outta window while its raining outside.. B-E-A-UTIFUL. did you work loops or MIDI with this one.?
ps. chicks who dig music software are hot!! Haha..

SpAzz
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
You know when I started out with Acid Pro it was in creative desperation. I was hoping that I would be able to string together simple melodies then pass them on to one of my guitarist friends or something and get them to make me a "proper" track. Not to say I don't like techno.. cuz I love it... but I didn't think I was capable of composing anything people would want to listen to! lol Now I LOVE using this software... it's my leisure time sitting messing around with synths and beats. This one was all loops... I was clueless what a vsti was when I did this track. First 3 were all loops... all my newer stuff is and will be midi based though, I like the control ;)
waggly
waggly 27th Jan 2008 21:18 - 17 years ago
The melody on this song is very celtic and mysterious, this reminds me of michelle tumes a little bit. (I don't think I spelled her name right) You live in Canada and it shows in your music. I'm Canadian too. One thing I think would really help your voice is to always be thinking about pitch. Use a piano and match melodies absolutely as close as possible. This song has some flat passages that are only a few cents off, but noticeable. Anyway, that's just constructive, not an insult. You have a wonderful voice. Keep it up. Waggly
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Yeah.. I'm pretty much self taught with my singing and I kinda threw myself into this track. I probably should have spent more time practicing the vocal bit, but I have 2 boys, 11 and 13 (plus take care of an autistic child) so I have to take my recording moments when I get them lol. I have a cover I did of Situation a couple years ago where you can hear Brandon screaming in a tantrum on it in the kitchen. (Yep I need some studio space lol)
Thanks for the critique, it helps me... cool that you're Canuck too! :) Lisa
Rhythm_Cmad
Rhythm_Cmad 27th Jan 2008 02:05 - 17 years ago
this is gr8 song thru n thru...the melody of ur voice really draws the listener thru the song like it should...rly made me just relax and take a deep breath...and im always on the go so thats a feat i thank you for
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks very much, I'm glad that you found it relaxing.... that was certainly my intention when I put it together :) Thanks for listening! Lisa
Resist_Agony
Resist_Agony 24th Jan 2008 13:27 - 17 years ago
I love this song! You have a fantastic voice, it fits the song wonderfully. I read you description and I think you are your own worst critic. Keep these coming!

Bossle'
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks very much Bossle, I'm glad you liked it :-) Now that I'm starting to get more used to the controls in Acid Pro I feel less daunted. I appreciate your listen and comment... thanks!
freelinger
freelinger 23rd Jan 2008 20:46 - 17 years ago
you just took me to a nice place, you have a wonderful tone and special quality within your songs, xx
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks very much, I'm glad that you liked it :-) You have a fan in me already! xx
Sector7even
Sector7even 19th Jan 2008 11:12 - 17 years ago
by what i heard, this is a freakin sweet effort and song. beautiful voice! wow..wanna throw down lyrics 4 me?
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Heya :-) I am always up for sharing vocals... if you have some stuff you'd like me to collab on just send it my way and I'll see what I can do. Thanks for listening!
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass 10th Jan 2008 01:52 - 17 years ago
Whoa.....a voice!...Incredible release and modulation.....wonderful!!
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks very much for listening :-) My voice is about the only instrument I can play so I tend to spend a fair bit of time using it. Glad you liked this!
darkhorse
darkhorse 8th Jan 2008 04:31 - 17 years ago
relaxing and nifty..great vocal work..
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks for listening, I'm glad you liked this :-)
oetloek
oetloek 7th Jan 2008 03:41 - 17 years ago
i think it,s great like it is now i make it my favorite track for now it,s very relaxing

so keep it up coming i like to hear you,re tracks
greetings from a dutchie from rotterdam
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Hehe, here in Canada, a dutchie is a square donut with raisins in it! Thanks for listening, I'm glad you liked this :-)
Nittso
Nittso 5th Jan 2008 10:00 - 17 years ago
Voice sounds good! When ya gonna hit us up with some vocal samples!?!?!? I'd like to use some if you're willing to give them up.
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Hiya :-) I'm going to attempt to get some vocal samples uploaded in the very near future... I have issues with randomly singing words etc, usually it's whole songs. I will upload stuff I record from now on though. Thanks for listening, glad you liked it :-)
anchor
anchor 4th Jan 2008 19:18 - 17 years ago
Beautiful. The mix is good, your voice sounds great, the lyrics are good...what more can I say. A true work of art. I'm impressed. : )
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks very much for listening, I appreciate it. Glad you liked it!
ultrabase
ultrabase 2nd Jan 2008 04:46 - 17 years ago
great singing,sounds good, but to mellow background for me (fits in the atmospher though).
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks, I appreciate it's not your style. It was just the mood I was in...I tend to write according to my moods hehe. Thanks for listening :-)
Pwnone
Pwnone 1st Jan 2008 13:26 - 17 years ago
mello as fuck. im smoking a fat as blunt to this one..hahaha. im telling you, your voice is crazy!! it goes so fresh with your beats. What you need tho, is a string or some kinda little extra sound playing when you go high pitched, it'll really even everything up.
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
LMAO @ mello as fuck! Thanks for listening, I'm glad you liked this... I am still learning what's too much in adding effects, always afraid I'll clutter it. Thanks for the idea, I'll keep that in mind when I'm doing tracks like this. :-)
OPENMINDSDB
OPENMINDSDB 30th Dec 2007 13:02 - 17 years ago
NICE TRACK LISA OUR FAV TOO, GREAT VOICE, SOUNDS BIT LIKE A SLOW KOSHEEN TRACK, GREAT WORK &
THANKS FOR OUR REVIEW,
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
I'm going to have to check out Kosheen (please don't smack me for not being familiar lol) I appreciate the listen.. thanks :-)
Gsusfrk
Gsusfrk 30th Dec 2007 11:47 - 17 years ago
You have an amazing voice, well done!! Great work!
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks very much, glad you liked it :-)
MrRobot
MrRobot 29th Dec 2007 22:02 - 17 years ago
very relaxing composition
great arragement , my fav.
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks Mr Robot.. I loved that little guitar riff.. which I am positive I nabbed off here. Just not sure who from anymore! Thanks for listening!

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