i like it..what do you mean you dont like it.? good job on this. and to think this is only your 3rd song.... i smell potential. or that could be my new deodorant.. either or they both smell good..Hahaha

SpAzz

Pretty interesting backing, it reminded me of delerium, and you have an awesome voice (I think you unleashed it more in some of your other tracks though), you never seem to miss a note! Maybe one day when i make something that needs vocals, you'd be kind enough to do a collab :) Keep up the good work!

very very catchy melody!!!!!
great songwriting on this .... you really are on the way up ....
perfect ....

peace, rei
(oh, and there's one loop I used myself for a song called

I would say debrah harry meets Madonna in your voice..wonderful listen. I just made a playlist of all you and Im now running it through my home stereo...LOUD!

its like a freakin dance club up in here yo!..lol
my kids are boogyin' to your songs as we speak..so cute...til they pooh...gizz.

this isnt my style of music its more of a ...you know what i dont know what its like but got a good vibe, at least you have a sense of rythm and composur :D

Big sick and tastes so good.

Excellent track! you REALLY gotta bring your vocals up, though. You get lost in the music(which is dirty,smoky,dark,with a light breeze blowing across my face), and I really want more from you. I feel like you are standing behind the music. You have talent, so let it shine, girl!

i like the spooky dance feel on this track and ur vocals are great keep it up

I'll say it again,you've got a great voice!...which I'd bring forward in the mix...It's the main thing..it's the focus...it's the hook....it's very cool..........regards planet

ya i like this one fur shure, the intro is hella scary. haha. good name for it too.

it really kicks ass i like the intro really spooky
the vocals ..?? is that you ??

very very nice track greeting from rotterdam holland

kick ass job. nice vocals

Great song, nice arrangement, cool sounds & wicked vocals, cheers Slap...

I havent been active for a century and I thought I should review something here, so I clicked on the first featured track. I must say I am gald I did ... pretty nice work you have here. The singing I must say is pretty good and you have talent in writing lyrics, something I havent attempted to do so I cannot criticise it, lol ... Now the structure is good, well if you have singing you have to work on getting your patterns to wrap themselves around it well, and you did a good job at that. The bassline is pretty good and the percussion is very good! the synths sound pretty good ... any vsts used? now for the criticising, hmmm ... not much but the first thing that comes to mind is the production. the bass and some of the other mid range elements like some part of the percussion could have been EQ'ed a bit better, there is a little clash, but it isnt very audible ... The loop you used doesnt have a strong kick, which I would've loved to hear in this track ... maybe you didnt want one, but anyway ... also you could have put in some a lead to go with the beautiful vocals, that would have made this one a killer. Also the percussions in the break 2:50 I think sound good, but, there isnt enough variation i the percussion at this stage, but I guess this about as far as you can get using a loop based program like Acid pro, I know people would disagree, but I like fl studio instead because it gives you the option of

good words,the vocal could rise a few db!
i can here the words but mis the power.
good singing though.

Sweet tune! That kick drum sound is realllllllly nice. Very 80s synthpop style. Very nice, and your vocals are blondie-like. Congrats, Im a satisfied listener!

fuurreesshhh!!! simply fresh!
the only problem is your vocals. You usually put your vocals together veery well. What happened here? They seem foggy and low volumed compared to the beat. There were times when i couldnt hear what you were saying, but other than that it was real good. keep it up.

Yes, its a very well put together dance song. you had my little cousins dancing...haha.

I like it :) im a newbie and still learning the loop game but i do know when something sounds good :)

This is really a cool dark dance song! I like that!
Keep on your work!

nice song. sounds really good for the 3rd track using the software. nice vocals too. keep it up.

nice vocals
have you sung?