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28th Dec 2009 20:30 - 14 years ago
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Description : Updated it again with a new (and last,lol) mix.I worked with great beats by Sezrah and Mr Robot.Doesn't have any guitar for the moment,I might even leave it like this.Hope to get some feedback and tips.
Thnaks for listening

Comments (13)

If you have time take a listen and give FrenchKid18 some feedback.

n0mad23
n0mad23 21st Jan 2011 19:47 - 13 years ago
Whatever "genre" it is, I dig this immensely. Regardless of what genre you do, there's a Frenchkid signature sound that pervades all. This is a very good thing (imo) as there's a built in reward mechanism in recognizing it.

Glad I checked your track page.
EVRiM
EVRiM 25th Nov 2010 21:05 - 14 years ago
I love this. Beat is killer. Composition, too, has great potential.
Kaydeem
Kaydeem 28th May 2010 22:47 - 14 years ago
I think you've got serious talent my friend. Great vocals, fantastic lyrics and awesome beats etc. Good production all round. Well done. I enjoyed your track very much! :)

Peace, KDM.
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown
Thanks a lot for this very nice review!Really happy you enjoyed
Cheers
theassociation
theassociation 31st Mar 2010 08:32 - 14 years ago
bass suits this really well. love the rythym and the space within the beats, great
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown
Thanks for reviewing again.Think I need to arrange the end but I'm quite satisfied with this one.Glad you like it
Cheers
French Kid
theHumps
theHumps 24th Feb 2010 14:00 - 14 years ago
Hey, I think it gets better each time I hear it!! Like the new beat, different than your usual beats. Look forward to hearing the next version with the guitar fills on it!

Wayne
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown
Thanks a lot Wayne,
For the moment,I have no idea for the guitar fills but I'm gonna work on it tonight.You're more than welcome if you have any suggestion
Cheers
French Kid
djdivine
djdivine 18th Feb 2010 23:23 - 14 years ago
hmm dude I think this has nothing to do with " electro" but still I like this track.. cheers..
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown
Thanks very much for the review
I'm not really good at classifying track,lol but I'm glad you like it
Cheers
French Kid
koble
koble 18th Feb 2010 17:17 - 14 years ago
You have such a good voice and lyrics Frenchkid. What this piece needs a stronger backing. I think your voice is a little forward in the mix. I'm glad to see you trying out the loop thing. Stick with it and you'll get better and better on the loop approach.
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown
Hi koble,
you're def right about the backing and the vocals.Think I'll update a new mix in a few days with some guitar add too.
Thanks for the review and tips
French Kid
theHumps
theHumps 18th Feb 2010 10:46 - 14 years ago
This is coming along nicely! The bass sounds cool, it kinda offsets the drum and guitar and works pretty good, imo!

Wayne
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown
Thanks a lot Wayne,
I think I'll try another ending to that song but no explosion this time,lol
French Kid
RickMal
RickMal 14th Feb 2010 18:37 - 14 years ago
this is good man,but i feel it could have a few lil touches,but bein unexpierenced in this genre myself aswel i cant say what,still sounds good tho,i think the base is fine,showin your versatility in this one again,mal
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown
Thanks Mal,
I'm still wondering about adding some guitars,I'll probably do and see how it sounds
Cheers
French Kid
MStokes
MStokes 12th Feb 2010 16:27 - 14 years ago
Terrific bs/gtr hooks - man thematically + musically you have got some cool opportunities to glitch that demo beat unmercifully and still serve the song. 2nd listen: Daddy Cool bass works!! Don't take that away! Can't wait to hear you step on this a little more.
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown
Thanks for reviewing again Michael.So I'm keeping the Daddy cool bass,lol and Imight add some guitar too.
Cheers
French Kid
Marj
Marj 12th Feb 2010 14:13 - 14 years ago
hey FrenchKid, my good friend... this track is really awesome... and the vocals, how i wish i could do it on my vocals too... great, really great...faved it! :D

God Bless,
Marj
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown
Ha ha,you're everywhere,lol.
Thanks a lot Marj,your reviews always mean a lot to me.And I appreciate even more cause I'm not that confident in creating electro tracks.
Cheers
French kid
jfw
jfw 12th Feb 2010 11:05 - 14 years ago
The music for this is very different for you and really reminds me of Spivkurls stuff - good work.
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown
Yeah,you're definitely right!I realized that when listening to the final mix.I'm a great fan of Spivkurl's music so It certainly had an influence on me.
Thanks for reviewing so frequently
French Kid
theHumps
theHumps 29th Dec 2009 00:02 - 14 years ago
Nice vocal performance and guitar playing. Definitely more drums in the mix.

Can you mute the hihat in your drum track? I think there would be spots where just the kick and snare could just be playing or just the kick might sound good like in the "Cuz I'm a lier" part.

Just a suggestion.
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown
Thanks Wayne
The beat is just temporary,it's supposed to stay only for the intro and verse.I thought of finding another for the chorus and bridge.I'm not sure you can(at least I can't,lol)mute the hi hat which sounds like a great idea.I'll see what I can do.By the way,I thought you might be interested in adding some bass to my song called "Lost in Space".Let me know
Cheers
French kid

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