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16th Jan 2010 01:36 - 14 years ago
Description : This is my new song I made for my next video I am doing for machinima.com. It is weird, I know. It isn't the direction I plan on going with music, but it was sure fun to write the lyrics.

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give RayKoefoed some feedback.

JJWeekz
JJWeekz 2nd Jan 2013 12:41 - 11 years ago
So sexy, came here from your loops, nice job!!

I think it'd be totally fun if a sexy low female voice could sing the verses for you (pick me pick me!) in first person over your track, and with you still on the chorus- if you're interested. I only do this as a hobby and always give full credit where it's due when sharing.

https://soundcloud.com/jjweekz

write4heaven@hotmail.com
Crypt
Crypt 27th Feb 2010 01:29 - 14 years ago
Love the lyric's and the beat. "It seems her kisses always require stitches." That's just so heavy and wicked dude. Great synth's and your voice is not bad either. Good work dude!!
Salook
Salook 29th Jan 2010 00:30 - 14 years ago
Yeah, this is quality very menacing, love the sharpness of the hats and vocal effects, very well put together man loving it, really got me wanting to see what visuals inspired this, need to check these videos i am reading about in your reviews.

One for the faves, thanks.
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thank you Salook. I don't think the machinima community cares much for this song/video. I didn't think it was the least bit disturbing, but perhaps there is a bigger percentage of young views that I didn't consider. The might be thinking "ew, gross, a half naked woman (cootie shields up)" =}
Zikanis
Zikanis 25th Jan 2010 18:53 - 14 years ago
thats one sick kick! the lyrics r really Lola Angst style, what effects did u put on the vocals? soundin good
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thanks Zikanis. The chorus and verses both were just double vocal tracks with different pitches, and I added a little of an odd sounding setting on Fruity Flangus vst in FL Studio 9
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 16th Jan 2010 17:20 - 14 years ago
This is totally awesome, it seems like you're not giving yourself enough credit by putting this under "weird". Your vocals are really inpressive, I really like when you pitch shift them. The music is great too, it creates a great bed for your vocals to lay in. This is getting faved and DL'd for sure! Thanks for sharing!
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thanks Spivkurl. You are right. I don't know what else to classify it as since Alternative still isn't an option. What would you suggest?
Thanks too for the inspiring comment about the vocals.
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 16th Jan 2010 11:59 - 14 years ago
What a great track again!Some NIN reminiscence but still,it's distinctively your style.The vocals sound very good and I like the effect you chose.Like Koukotsu,I'd really enjoy hearing more vocals from you.I'll check the video too
Cheers
French Kid
RayKoefoed
RayKoefoed replied Unknown
Thanks Frenchkid, you always give such kind reviews. I really appreciate hearing that people like my vocals. I am getting a lot more comfortable recording myself. I think I will be trying something more melodic next time.
Thanks again.

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