Yah I like this beat a lot. Not really smart in the technical stuff, but your flow seems please good. The hook, I'm guessing is the singing, is a little too wordy for a rap,song but I did get the message. Perhaps keep the "we keep on holding on" part, that's what people are gonna remember, it sticks. But good job. :-)

Nice one man. Maybe some better equipment to record your vocals would do you wonders man.

Real smooth. I did wish the vocals were pulled forward a bit.

Good job bro

koo......i gess....like da lil high pitch effect

Very well put together homie. The beat is simple yet very intriguing and the lyrics are thought provoking. Im really feeling the poetic vibes that radiate off of the entire track. Good Job homie! From I and I to you and yours 1love!

dIG YER ahem sorry for the caps.. um I dig yer panning a lot. very wide snare on them left.

I like UK grime/rap or whatever. I would ... actually like?
Yer vox, I would even compress them more man... I don't trust the effing meters in Pro-tools and FL and Reason and Ableton and whatever... I just want more juice out of those vocals.

Some way to look at this?

I would perhaps duplicate the vocal track, and then drop the volumes on both respectively both by -6/-10 decibels? Followin me?
Then after doin' that, thro a compressor on another and then work down from a 2:1 ratio and see if you can't squeeze some more "ooomph" from the vocals.

I would go on further about perhaps sidechaining an EQ and following the compressor off the beat and melody so you get this pulling breathing call and response.

With fruity loops,.. I don't know how to do this, but I know you would drop a send track, and then throw the sends out there, and then have a compressor referrence the send track from a narrow bandwidth .. probably like 300-1300 and then mix volume accordingly so your vox are the main focus, but there's always the music.. I like doing stuff like that.

Furthermore, I would perhaps consider doing some more reverb on the chorus, that's a effing nice chorus you got there.

Anyway, don't take this as crap talking, it's just stuff I would do.

I am faving this, you took on the form of Jesus and Fergie whilst I was listening.

wassup good job on da mixing and da vocals. Da vocals went together good in da chorus and in da verses. Keep making good beats.

nice track main. lyrics are hot and the beat is sick as hell. good work. check out my new track warrior and review if you get a chance. PEACE.

This is a hot ass track bro. Keep hustlin

the beat is tight really feeling the drums.

yo im feeln this here maman!!!dope track!!diggn the flow!!!

Easy but nice man, totally fits with the beat. like the lyrics man, keep em coming! M-Nikz