Hey awesome job! I love your take dubstep :) It makes my ears ultra happy lol. I would love to hear the the finished product!! Originality is key and you've got it! Keep it up!

originality is a really loose term, so dont worry. just going down the list of dubstep, this really stands out for its mood. most dubstep has a dark tone, this one is upbeat and pretty fun to listen to. it is true that the wobble is a rather standard one, but getting an interesting wobble bassline is always a big problem when it comes to dubstep.

i might seem crazy saying this, but maybe you should turn the wobble down a little. i think chud was trying to say that the lead synth makes this peice (if you know what i mean) so we want to hear more of it

overall good stuff going here

ive noticed that some people on looperman can be a bit [what i hope is unintentionally] CeeUNextTuesdayYeah: especially hard on those just starting out in what they consider their genre of expertise, for lack of a better term. there are many different types/variations of dubstep; it is a quickly expanding genre. i heard the first version of this track, and i think you are progressing leaps and bounds. not all dubstep synth has to be groundbreaking. if thie levels are tight and the arrangement is solid, i dont see whats wong with a more simple synth. but again, ALL comments received are opinions based on personal preference.
keep it up. youve got the skills...

Lol!

I find this quite funny actually, its almost a piss take of dubstep, at least, i dunno, the lead synth just makes me laugh abit. (Not in a derogatory way). But yes the drums are good you have a lot of stuff going on in the background and I think the answer to your question is Yes it is dubstep, but I would either go all the way with the lead synth (and dont ask me what i mean by that because i dont know) or scrap it and work on a more interesting bassline, because the one you have here really doesnt do anything for me and its just a typical very easy boring synth that you hear on nearly everyone's first dubstep track. Dont worry, i make exactly the same too, you can go back and check, they are still on looperman :P

But your drums are very good. It suggest's to me that you've been playing around with music for a while? Theres some really good sounds in there that take practice to get done right and so I think once you get some decent synths down your then able to put your drums behind them and you'll be well on your way. :)

very good song. definately dubstep material. you should work on this some more, it starts to get good, then it ends. i'd like to hear the finished product!!

Cheers!
-Ed (Crutonix)

yo stop man ya need to make ya own beat to be original!!!!! thats beat is of a drumz sample pack i have hre. nice noizes and that but are they yours. sorry for being so straight forward but to be original for me you have to make a tune from scratch not put some one elses beat through a gross beat machine. start a fresh man. with your own stuff.

much love Senciman....

carry on, sir...carry on!
this is a cool dubstep electro mix. love your synth work on this. mad solid drums as well. youve got a playful lil wobble in teh background. i would only suggest letting it come forward a bit more, shine as the star of the piece at times. this is a great start to what could be a really cool piece.
nice work!

Jep ! This is DubStep Mate And A Reall Nice One For Ure First Try ! And It Got Track Potential. But.... Don't Worrie So Much What Other People Think Of Ure Style Mate ! Just Carry On And Make Ure Own Thing ! Be Original Like U Are Being In This Beat

Peace Out !
Provo