Be true to you...that is true. Original.

Uh no. I reread his review and he doesn't mention too quiet, he was saying that the reverb from the walls was subtle but distracting. To me your voice is too loud..and it is probably for the reasons BT mentions, tinny and missing the depth. So maybe just fixing that will be fine volume wise.

luck bro

Dj

not bad man. I thought that your voice was a little too dominant. I'd try turning it down and adding some effects to it. put it into the music not on top of it. yea I just read djbirchtree and I agree with him.
Good luck with it and keep it up.

DJ

hey man that was tight.

nice lyrics. flow so hot like bacon hahahaha. nice work. check out my new track hey shorty and review if you get a chance. PEACE.

Not bad. You need to find a room to record vocals where you don't have to sound like your trying to keep your voice down and where you don't get the echo off the walls. It's subtle but it's distracting. It also is probably a result of your mic. Your voice sounds tinny and is missing the mid and low tones to give your rap some depth. Finally, you need to put more feeling into your vocals. It sounds like your not really feeling it and are really trying to force it. Take these as you will, it's not bad but with a little work it could be a lot better.

nicely done ...but finish it ...because i think you got it right where it should be ..just tone it up a notch