Love the vocals in this song. Something seems to be missing to tie everything together. Great start, great vocals!

Bossle'

i love the energy of the vocals, very in your face and makes me want to get up and rock out hehe

well, that's basically a good track ....
though it's not so well structured as

i like

Keep that song, I don't make but I listen to a lot of music, and thats definitely a keeper. Overall, had strong effect on me throughout.

Ok BT...I'm going to give this an honest appraisal.....I love what's going on with the vocals,the pauses,the passion,the simple power of it and how the drums whip up at the end of the vocal line and then hurl it into the next verse...........Now here's the rub-overlying this is this way too busy cacophony of noise(I know it's labeled industrial-but to me that's just a tag to fuck up a potentially solid number)If this had a serious framework-main groove-chorus whatever-you would be cooking with gas...I'm not trying to mess with your poetic license..(it's only my opinion)but lets face it every person or group if they keep at music hone their skills and get tighter and better..that's what I feel is needed...because if you do you'll just jump and I mean jump.........also If you ever want a bass line..give me a bell......cheers planet