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20th Jun 2010 06:53 - 14 years ago
Description : Just something i whiped out of my >.> ahem at like 3 am and spent till like 9 in the morning geting it all down, its a drum machine but never the less, i was so determined to finish this. ">=[ ahh its only 4?! thats fine i can finish it!!!" lol its not really metal. but idk what else id put it under, im working towards getting my singer to throw lyrics to it when hes not so busy. something like "control machine". i added some synth in there as well, i was a little unsure of what to really add or take out but hey help me out =] tell me what i should add or change or anything at all (other then vox, im workin on it =P!!)

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If you have time take a listen and give jjy some feedback.

sumerlin
sumerlin 6th Jul 2010 22:08 - 14 years ago
i really like this alot.. reminds me of iron maiden! nice work my freind.
SpyderX
SpyderX 4th Jul 2010 08:27 - 14 years ago
Sounds like metal to me, bro. The guitars are nice (if a bit loud in spots), and the drum machine rocks. Don't know what kind of software you use, but if you've got a soundfont player there are some awesome freebie acoustic drum SF's. So, if you really don't like the drum machine sound, there are definitely other options. If you want to know more, just contact me ~ I can line you out with just about anything.

Peace,

Spyder
jjy
jjy replied Unknown
thanks =] i've been trying to get a hold of AD but it cost money...so i just said screw it, i use alot free samples and use FPC from FL =/ but hey im glad you liked it and thanks for the tips! =D i should try SF.
CrashTheSystem
CrashTheSystem 27th Jun 2010 04:59 - 14 years ago
i disagree with your statement jjy. i would consider this metal. good metal at that. i do think that the drums could be a tick louder (just a tick) to better match the guitar but then again i am a critic. great song keep up the good work!
jjy
jjy replied Unknown
Hey thanks! i'll crank up the drums just a tad then. =] once i get vocals to it i'll def. put up the new version of it.
Steinaa
Steinaa 20th Jun 2010 21:47 - 14 years ago
Some heavy rythmguitars earlier would be awesome on this. Although the track itself as it is, is great. The guitar might be a bit loud compared to the rest of the mix at times, but still a fast-paced and driving track that makes you sit and listen in excitement of whats coming up next.
Well done jjy.
jjy
jjy replied Unknown
thanks alot! i think i'll take your advice and turn down the guitars a bit and see if i can make it to where it doesn't brick wall as much. thanks a lot for taking the time to listen.
sirrmineyez
sirrmineyez 20th Jun 2010 07:11 - 14 years ago
as being one of the first to listen to that i thought it was well composed not to heavy not to light just right,awesom himonics i think youve got something going here.keep it up,great job
kia ora
jjy
jjy replied Unknown
thanks alot, lets me know i've still got the kid in me =]!

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