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23rd Jun 2010 18:07 - 14 years ago
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Description : 110 degrees in the hot sun among the plam trees,the smell of gun powder and oil.The ones you fear the most You cant even tell if there the enemy!Back home,they get a hold of these rilfes that can split a water mellon in four with one shot! They walk into schools and stores, yes , this is fear! This kind of fire power in the wrong hands! A very distribing image!

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JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 18th Apr 2011 06:06 - 13 years ago
Track sounds pretty darn good to me, my friend, as it is, but that's just my humble opinion.

All The Best

John
BrianMaiden407
BrianMaiden407 replied Unknown
Hey John, my apoligies for not thanking sooner here,been in the process of redoing the whole studio and picking up on some interesting mixes of styles!!

thank you big time for your ears and
reviews!

Brian ;)
Fayz
Fayz 25th Jun 2010 11:48 - 14 years ago
wow, you never fail to impress, i could definitely see some vocals to this, very powerful stuff here. just listening to it, reading the title, and reading the description, my head got over killed with lyrics. great job, though as previously stated im not sure if that particular guitar works, i think that the idea of having a guitar in there is brilliant, i like the edge that it gave but there's just something about that one that doesn't seem to fit entirely with the mood.

Much respect, Fayz
BrianMaiden407
BrianMaiden407 replied Unknown
Hey Fayz, thanks for stopping by and giving your opions on this! yeah, its is one of those situations were ya just are not hitting the mark on a tune,you try this, you try that and nothing seems to point in a foward direction.So I just fliped this off the Pc and posted it on good old looperman.I was not happy the way guitar was going down in the parts and just moved on with out frying my brain out ! lol! Reason why i moved it out of featured track and had the song on the bottom of the list! Sometime up the road a revised will happen here! thanks again guy for your kind words and keep creative!

Bm;)
rei4real
rei4real 23rd Jun 2010 18:41 - 14 years ago
very very interesting track!!!
like endtransmission said before: the beginning is very strong ... what I miss then is a catchy hook line, don't know if it should be lead guitars or a synth, maybe vocals ...
the git is maybe not powerful enough, or it's mixed too much in the background, not sure ...
a hip hop rock track is a good perspective for this one!!
anyway, I like it!
and it's good work ...

peace, rei
BrianMaiden407
BrianMaiden407 replied Unknown
Hey refs, how are ya! thanks for stoping by and listening! yeah, i got a bit lost for ideas on the track, tried some thing out, was not happym felt the holes in there, tried some things, still was not happy! looks like this is one of those open tracks to work out at a later time!I was tring to get something underway with it,so far this is as far as i got in a few weeks with track,I hopeing enough feedback will guide me to a finish! allways many many thanks!

thanks brother!

Bm;)
phantomhim
phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 18:21 - 14 years ago
I'd stick with the first part of this choon and turn into a hip hop choon if I were you. Sounds better before the guitar hit comes in, If you get the EQ right on that guitar and beef up the drums that's a damn good hip hop track waiting to be made.

EDIT: No worries, it really could be an awesome hip hop track. If you want a remix done, let me know. : )
BrianMaiden407
BrianMaiden407 replied Unknown
interesting,iam gonna tri out some things after i get some feedback on it, was a experment in the making!
thanks guy!

Bm;)

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