Hey, this is alright for a start to a track. Don't take this in a bad way, I just wanna give some tips on the few things I know about song production. The track needs a few adjustments. First off, the timing isn't really in sync through the whole track. Fix the notes so that they fit in with the drums a little better. Second, there needs to be some more diversity in the track. Change up the notes.. I feel like you have a good rough outline, but in the end, there isn't really a melody. All of it seems more like background music to a complete song. Fill those gaps with some synths or something to give the track a more solid feeling. Anyways, I don't want to write a novel here..so I'll leave it at that. Hope some of the info I gave will be helpful. Take care.

~Influx

Hey mate

Nice work you have done hear so fars, to me it does sound like it is not complete, intro is little long without much change, neeed to give little more changes through out the piece, does sound little like the same all the way through, I know we are all still learning here, Going by your description I was expecting vocals but no vocals???, that is poss what it needs to help with the changes in the track....Good work so fars...just needs to be completed...when you do please let me know and I will come back for another listen, dont agree with the guy that reviewed before me, reviews like that are not helpful, just plain rude, piece of advice on the other review, dont take them to heart or to serious, he is not showing you any respect :( Peace man....Estefano.....

bra I'm sorry but I'ma have to crit ya..... your stuffs kinda wack dawg....but ey hope u dnt think I'm attacking you. peace