cool track love the keys

Real coo for your st try but try more transpose in the pitch maybe a pad or too and most important don't forget a break in the drums or adding a an additional drum panned to once side can spice things up a lil but nice for your st hope u get better

its pretty good (my 1st attempt sounded a disaster lol)
here's my take: lower the level of the piano a little and boost the drums and bass because those and the vocals should be the prominent sounds in any hip hop track
creatively it would have been nice if you added a second melody/counterpoint or other instruments because it kind of does get a little repetitive

ok ok its a sad track not sad like bad but you would have to rap or sing about love or a friend but as far as the beat add some sound effects congos would sounds nice dont be afraid to play around with it but its good i like it

Nice piano grove going there,the track needs to have built up, like a flower blossoming! violins,guitars, etc, something to take it into another step,going into a heavy beat, with lyrics,
just what I would do! One reason i love loops so much, its because they state a idea to be developed into something and thats where I come in and take it to another level! its all in the creative mind set and its even more a rush when you can commucate thru music and reach people with something very close to you. keep it up and write it up!

Peace

Bm;)