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15th Jul 2010 03:57 - 14 years ago
Description : This track I actually put together in less than a half an hour. I built it around a string loop from Piano Sounds. Thank you for that. Than I laid my spoken word vocals over it. The poem is about conforming to what society demands. Almost losing yourself in a trance, hence I built a trance trakc to surround the vocals. This is the first track I am uploading here, so please all feedback is greatly appreciated

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JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 19th Mar 2011 23:36 - 14 years ago
Great words, my friend, and well spoken. The backing track would be more effective it came a little more to the forefront.

All The Best

John
BrianMaiden407
BrianMaiden407 15th Jul 2010 07:00 - 14 years ago
Love the way the voice was recorded guy! really makes the track!
pianosounds has monster ears big time donet he? nice track, like the reciting!

Bm;)
Writenow921
Writenow921 replied Unknown
THanks, and yea PianoSounds is pretty amazing, i am working with a few of his other samples now. I'm really glad i found htis ste, trying to make some connections, and hopefully I will have another track up soon.
Effluence
Effluence 15th Jul 2010 05:59 - 14 years ago
Hi, your words are very powerful great lyrics. Your track is off balance your vocals are much louder than the music. The words are very deep, so you can captue people with the innotation in your voice, some parts can by loud, some soft, some angry some painful.. ect. Your vocals are loud mostly, so innotate and prononciate your words.
Respect
~Effluence~
Writenow921
Writenow921 replied Unknown
Thanks, I will try to incorporate the advice into my next piece. Hopefully I will have something new up soon and maybe you can check it out.
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 15th Jul 2010 04:46 - 14 years ago
I'm feeling this if you can get someone to balance your track out then it would be awesome
Writenow921
Writenow921 replied Unknown
Thank you, and yea, i know the levels are all off, i was just excited to get a track up you know, hopefully i will learn to balance it out more with practice.

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