the beat is sick! and your vocals remind me of open mic. its hella different but i can see this like being a score for a scene in a movie where like a hero getting siked up to whoop some ass or somn lol.

I'm Not Used Too Listening 2 This Kinda Art ( Music ) But It's Nice To Hear something Different ! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK !

Nice one! The use of both your vocals and the background ones really work well with the percussion. And I do so dig that percussion - a bit Post-Industrial, a bit martial, and a really compelling.

You really do fantastic rhythmic things with your voice!

A bit of constructive criticism: have you tried this with the effect lowered on your vocals? The current form works well, but I did find myself wondering how it might be with that reverb(?) turned down a bit to give your voice a bit more warmth. It might be a nice contrast to what you're saying. I don't know if it's worth doing, but since it came to mind I thought I'd offer it up.

This has a nice vibe to it, minimal backdrop and i like the sound of your recorded vocals, hope you are thinking of posting some acapellas i am sure they would go down a treat. welcome to the loop. peace.

This is pretty cool, I think the song flow could have taken more directions. But you have a pretty good mixdown and mastering of the final product.