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26th Jul 2010 13:58 - 14 years ago
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Description : This was a song i made for my ex gf i never got to finish...long story how it happened but i promised her i would finish this song. she always complained how just the acoustic version was sad. but it my eyes it was a happy song because of how i could hear it in my head and background and if she ever hears this, i kept my promise. well i kinda wanted some hiphop rockish flow to it with auto tuned chorus. this isn't the final copy. but at least i got to a stopping point. im guessing if you can read the story behind the music go ahead lol let me hear it. also tell me how you like the setup and drums, guitar, piano. Thanks.

Comments (9)

If you have time take a listen and give jjy some feedback.

ChrisHall
ChrisHall 8th Aug 2010 14:27 - 14 years ago
Hey man. Great song. I really like the feel to it. all the sounds compliment each other and its really well mixed. gonna give you a fave dude!
Please add vocals man....i would love to hear this with somebody singing :)

Good work

Chris
jjy
jjy replied Unknown
hey im glad you like it =]. actually someone did a colab with me check out the guy below named "improvewitherror"
Steinaa
Steinaa 2nd Aug 2010 21:45 - 14 years ago
Great flow on this one, simple, yet alot of groove on the drums. Fun to see that some people actually spend some time doing those parts, and it really pays off.
The piano is so amazing both when it comes to melodies and the sound itself.
Overall mixdown is perfect.
More of this man.

-Steinaa-
blackryan
blackryan 27th Jul 2010 16:34 - 14 years ago
Really nicely put together - just felt it would be even better with a great singer on top. Start reminded me of Blink 182. Nice job.
Gordw
Gordw 27th Jul 2010 12:11 - 14 years ago
I think that has to be one of the most moving tracks I've heard. I think if you had vocals added one day it would make this track such a hit (if it isn't already). The piano is perfect. Very nice listen. Thanks for sharing.
Gord
Vicen
Vicen 27th Jul 2010 04:40 - 14 years ago
Beautiful track. I love how everything sounds. Everything is in harmony. The rhythm of the guitar is really good, the battery is extraordinary, and the piano tells the story ... I think you could make a version with lyrics (although this is already very good).
ParkerMusic
ParkerMusic 27th Jul 2010 00:10 - 14 years ago
This is a real emotional piece. I love the piano work. The guitar could you use some spice in a few places but the overall composition is moving. Beautiful work. Keep it up.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 26th Jul 2010 19:59 - 14 years ago
Awesome track man, a lot of emotion to it, are you going to add vocals? If you are not I would really like to see if I can write something that would go with this, it is too good to be an instrumental only. Great job man, one of the best acoustic tracks I have heard.
jjy
jjy replied Unknown
hit me up on the email. if youd like to give it a shot. =] i'll be checking my email. when your done be sure to email me and tell me so i can hear it.
MStokes
MStokes 26th Jul 2010 16:49 - 14 years ago
it's so strange that when you feel about as beat as a person can possibly be you find a groove that matches that sadness but lifts you up and makes you keep going at the same time - this is a much appreciated track
Kikajon
Kikajon 26th Jul 2010 14:13 - 14 years ago
Woa, instant fav!
I liked the drums very much up to 1:35, I'd like a better flow in the chorus (?). And the guitar sometimes sounds a little dull – like old strings. A bit more sparkle would do the trick.
It sounds a like a bunch of negative critique, it isn't. The track is beautiful and well composed.
/pmk
jjy
jjy replied Unknown
hehe thanks yeah my strings are pretty old. geting a new set would be a good idea. thanks for the remember =D im glad you liked it.

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