Very interesting sounds. Love the bass line and the effects on it.
Maybe a vocal is missing to enforce the hook.
Great work, I like it very much

ciao, k

I like what you have started here. I look forward to the finished track. :-)

I like this tune, espicially the intro bass, maybe you could milk that section a tad more it would be ill. Cant wait for the finished product.

checked out your pictures and it looks good. keep in mind every sound will react different to eq so don't be afraid to stray slightly from my advice, every sound will have it's sweet spots but what you've done looks good and it is sounding Much better. the new percussion is cool too... using that loop on every other bar as you have is good but once it reaches 1 minute i would put it on every bar to groove the melody a bit harder before it changes.... i think you have it on every bar for the last couple but i would try starting that trend at the one minute area. look forward to hearing more.

i listened again twice the last couple days cause you have good ideas and i want to help you out and it's sounding nicer. i agree with stina that you could make a whole new song out of the lead synth and turn the opening sounds into a much more straight forward house track... at the same time i know how easy and tempting it is to beef everything up and morph the sounds and progress as the track goes. i just recently started having the patience to assemble a real house track but you've come far enough that you shouldn't eliminate the lead sound.the only difference will be a slight genre change which is irrelevant.... notes: the bass seems to move in a rotary way? not sure if my ears are playing tricks but i might hold back on that a little and work eq a bit more... one good way is bring up the low end where it starts to resonate but not go crazy, and bring up the very high end slightly with a faded mid/high range to make it less muffled and more distinct in the mix. then you can lower the volume a touch and still hear it nicely and get the bass resonance which will clean it up a bit. the lead could get a touch more mid range (maybe 2-3k area) to beef it up... i think it may have been heavier last time i listened. i would still milk the beginning longer, while you have gone a more progressive direction the foundation is still house and it needs a little more time. Hope this helps this is by far the longest review i've ever written haha sorry for ranting!

not bad.. loving the ideas !!

I really like this, even though it isn't done. It's been a while since I've heard house that sounded like this ^_^. What I really like is the "growling" synth that starts at 0:55.

Also I agree that the octave up thing near the end should be removed :3 . All in all though, it's extremely good!

*Update* I guess I'll add a pt.2 to this review since it's extended again.

I thought it was good before, I like it even better now. That style of house sounds really good =D

WAUV... Love the kinky techy beats and sounds (a bit like in the 80s, but with modern bass supplied) in, as the other reviewers says, the start from 0 to 0.38.. Then it goes too disco like to my taste and in another genre and style..., and You sit there arrrgghhh... It startet so nice and kinky and then breaks totally with another style and nice voice with nice effects.. But I would use that voice in another disco song or something and sing a bit more new waved cool/rough... and also smooth in accordance to the start..

Hugs Stina..

Nice start bro, could use a bassline with a side chain compressor on it to make it pump, cause at the moment its a little one level sounding also putting the same side chain on the gliding leed sound would help it gain a little texture.

Hope that helps a little

Nice you captured a blend of old and new school house sounds. I don't care for the octave up synth in the last 10 seconds but the acid sound at the beginning between 15 and 39 is nice and should go longer, maybe with percussion or some other sound changing over top. don't be afraid to let something play out for a while, that's what house music is great for. that is my advice. hope this helps.