Description : my first track ever. used garage band. beat is from primetimeproduction all his tracks are ill.please let me know what i can improve on. thanks
thanks bro i wanna be just like u all the tips realy mean alot to me and if it wasnt for honest opinions i wouldnt be doin this its about time i get some real feedback from a real artist like u thanx by the way cute avatar!
Good track bro considering it;s your 1st and the vox arent mastered it, it was clear that your mesg. came through in it...Try to just let your feelings hang out when you record...then compress and eq your vox and maybe add a couple adlibs here and there and you'll be real good...Just keep at it, kind of like shadow boxing, just compete with yourself because in the end you are your own worst enemy....
This track is heat. you got the right idea. next time try and put a little effect on your main vocal track. then use a second main vocal, heavy effect, pan just off center and turn it down. then use some backing vocal tracks to emphasize your main. thanks for the review.
man this track has got some real value in it. if you did some more mastering on the vocals, this could be gold. some of the lyrics arent my favorite but I see the message you are trying to get across and I agree with it completely. you got a good recorded voice man so keep on spittin that fire
thanks bro i apreciate the honesty.. im still learning how to master the vocals it can be a challange its all garge band and im new to it but thanks any ways peace out
Its aiight for a first track, try to express yourself more though... and maybe put some dubbles in, i always make mine to loud i havent perfected them yet. And less talking at the start like haha Lets Go or whatever.
Dubbles is where you record the send half of every line 2ice and make them a bit quiter, so sort of like and echo/reverb effect but sounds better... if you look at my song i wanna be a star youll be able to tell i have them in there. or u can do every 2nd line up to you...
Description : Hello everyone! EYEDYE back again with a rap track! I think I outdid myself on this one. I tried a more modern style of vocals, stacking them up and adding my own style and I love it. A little short for my taste, but I've just got so many projects. Solo stuff, My metal Band, and providing vocals for other loopers. (I didnt forget about you Danke!!!) So, for now, take it as is and maybe I'll return to it one day. Let me know what you think!
Since yall showed so much love, i uploaded a cleaner version.
Prod.by v3rsitile
BPM 147
Sample by Nofuk
Free NON-COMMERCIAL ONLY.
Tags:
Nav, Lil Uzi Vert, Trap, Lil Keed, Dababy, Nocap, Tm88, Polo G, Roddy Ricch, Quando Rondo, Gunna, Lil Baby, Juice Wrld, Lil Gnar, Ynw melly, Drake, Lil Tecca, Southside, G Herbo, TM88, Murda, Metro Boomin, Pierre Bourne, Playboi Carti, Tarentino, 808 Mafia, sizzle Travis Scott, voice of the heroes
Description : The rapper is BadgaNFK. One of the drum loops is cg5music. The rap is about Genghis Khan when he was a young man known only as Temüjin, living on the steps of Mongolia. These were rugged tribal peoples living as part of nature in what could be a very hostile environment. I tried to capture that in this, hence all the nature sounds.The ending is Mongolian people singing.
Description : in recognition of the King's coronation just reminding him there is another King in the UK :)))
cant publish lyrics because there's more than 3000 characters. :((
its a banger, all bars. 6 mins+ seatbelts needed.
Description : To make up for my absence, I decided to upload something you've never seen from me before. For the first time on this site, I did not make the instrumental of this track. The instrumental is a generic rap instrumental I found on youtube. I wanted to focus my energy and time solely on the rap and its lyrics. Hopefully, in doing so, the track is better off for it. Let me know what you think.
Description : Hey just produced this 100% ORIGINAL hip hop/rap beat. Haven't given it a title or cover pic (you can choose both). Would love it if any rappers spit fire over it. Free to use how ever you like, just add (Prod. Equinox) or something to that extent in the title. If you do use it, definitely send me a link. Would love to hear some of the talent within the rap community.
Description : Dark Piano like NAV, Lil Baby, Metro Boomin, Future///
Hit me on IG to work and send me anything u make with this mel/!
Hard Dark Melody
Dark NAV
Dark Piano Melody
Description : I heard a synth loop by Keishh (see link below) and liked it. I though I would add some piano, trap beat, and other instruments to it. What do you think?
Description : I love this German Rap Style from Mr Tadeus. . They shared the Accapella with us here on Looperman and I immediately went to "work". At the end I made a mixture of Rap, Hip Hop and Lofi. The lyrics are about someone who is always edgy, irritable and short tempered. He found out that at the end is must have been the stuff in the Internet that winds him up all the time. You may listen to the original song on Spotify
Description : When it comes to Hiphop, i'm all round. i can produce underground hiphop beat, real rap, trap, cypher. rnb... anything about hiphop music... this beat is made from an old soul music... THE DRAMATICS - BE MY GIRL... just put on your headphones or turn up your volume and bump to this... what i love about this beat is the ending.. enjoy people!!!!
Really showing you didn't think this out before you took this to the mic.
First or not - if you gonna mix lyrics from different people at least have some flow with it. GEEZE.
yours truly dont trip
Great piece of music my friend
All The Best
John
Dubbles is where you record the send half of every line 2ice and make them a bit quiter, so sort of like and echo/reverb effect but sounds better... if you look at my song i wanna be a star youll be able to tell i have them in there. or u can do every 2nd line up to you...
real laid back
do that sh#t