G'day gabz

the intro is very suspenseful and i feel like a weight has been lifted when the drums hit

it's great man!

u owned dem bells mate. congrats!
theFISHface

Hot beat I can mess with this it's different to the sytrus and the bass whats killing it and them bells .

Realmente tem um clima magico, algo muito agradavel, parabens

Olá Gabz , gostei da trilha. Tem um clima um tanto sombrio no início, e depois segue numa vibe legal. Meio cinemátic... Conordo com o John, que poderia haver mais produção. Espero que não se ofenda com o comentário, mas senti falta de uma melodia na parte final da música que desse mais unidade ao todo. No mais, àum belo trabalho.

ParabÃÂns.

VlaRB

life here is awesome yet just like in the world of us a little spice here and there can make for a little more vividness the eyes have the sight yet the heart is slowly creeping toward the deep of creation and inside is a small door there with a tremble of anxiousness waiting to be released and unleash a flurry of all the more gorgeous ...as is agreed perhaps some more accents like cymbal hits and perhaps a scrape for background heck a couple of sfx like perhaps thunder rain or perhaps ocean waves....woah .....sorry for the away carry ..starting to sound like one of my tracks ...lol....all the same this is a great track please continue at it and live your art full to creative life........peace....... also if possible eye would love a download so perhaps eye can play in this musical playground.....lol....magic word.......pleeease ....lol peace

Very different, nice slow dark feel. I like how it doesnt stick to one thing for too long, but at the same time, I felt like it had no structure you know? Then again, who cares lol
But in terms of getting vox over it, I think it might be difficult. Consider making it a bit more concise and defined.

Just a thought, I dig that xylo btw, very dark.
Keep grinding man, you can only get better. You and me are in the same boat haha

I found that when the bass kicked in the chimes became barely audible. With a bit more production this track would definitely be sweet.

All The Best

John

around 1:20 a completely different tune kicked in than what i been expecting, the background sounds, xylophone sound much darker than the foreground synth. keep it up and keep them coming

i agree with pianosounds and being new means play around and see all the features u have on your system, next go to loops section
and download loops and save them,then work them in with a drums,snares,claps,808bass,
and u will be alright.
nice track new guy:)