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11th Sep 2010 13:49 - 14 years ago
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Description : hope you like it i had great feed back from broken angel so i thought i would put this one up
if any one has any tips and advice i would be very greatful

Comments (11)

If you have time take a listen and give kerry some feedback.

Nequissimus
Nequissimus 12th Mar 2011 16:31 - 13 years ago
Wow. Really like this track. But you should consider to process your voice a bit to make it fit more in it's own place in the song. :)
DanielGtrman
DanielGtrman 2nd Nov 2010 21:39 - 14 years ago
You have a great gift of bringing the melancholic into your songs which I think is a winning formula. I like the simplicity of your folky style but I also agree with AllenV about collaborating here on looperman to extend and develop your musical styles and arranging. If you've listened to any of Minor2go's tracks then you'll know how good an arranger/producer he is. If time allows doing a collab would be the next step up. A very catchy and haunting track...
MADVICKO
MADVICKO 26th Sep 2010 11:23 - 14 years ago
Very,very good voice!You sing like an angel.You need some colaboration,and a better recording equipment.But the soul is here,and that`s the most important thing in music...
BlueKidFantikX
BlueKidFantikX 19th Sep 2010 23:33 - 14 years ago
i love your lyrics!
the acoustic songs from you are great. but some effects on your voice or an beat behind?

peace and respect
Fabse
Tacatta
Tacatta 19th Sep 2010 04:25 - 14 years ago
Again you have outstanding lyrics,and the way (style) you sing this song was very good.You have a very good voice and I bet you have just scratched the surface of what your capable of doing!Just keep belting out those tunes,experimenting with stuff like effects,mics etc.and have FUN!
AllenV
AllenV 14th Sep 2010 17:51 - 14 years ago
Very good Kerry,I hear your influences and think you have a gift for lyrics and putting all your songs together.I think Minor2go is on the right track...maybe some collaborating might serve your songs well and blow your songs into bigger productions like the influences you mentioned,you can do it!

Allen
kerry
kerry replied Unknown
thank you for your comment i would love to do well in my music it is just trying to work out how to better it and were to start from thank you for your great comment :)
yeshintae
yeshintae 13th Sep 2010 19:53 - 14 years ago
BIG UPS TO YOU ON THIS ONE!

imma luvin' your STYLE and LYRICS

i hope we can collab in the future
maybe do a hook or two for me
;)

Much Respect from LA
EzIcarus
EzIcarus 12th Sep 2010 06:15 - 14 years ago
Brilliant, reminded me of Nirvina (4 first plucked stings esp) I really like this track.

New producers never use FX to full advantage, it takes a lot of stuido time to even understand what is possible let alone doing what is right.

Great work Kerry

Ez Icarus
Psiren
Psiren 12th Sep 2010 00:44 - 14 years ago
Very nice vocals here. The looped track sounds great too. I agree with ChrissG on the adding effects part. I think with some reverb these vocals would have been amazing in a different respect.

You do sound a bit shy here, but everyone's like that when they start. So there's absolutely nothing wrong with that. But I will say I think you could sound fantastic if you found a way to open up and record.

I did notice a few microphone pops, and I know it's annoyingly hard to ensure you don't have them with home recording equipment, but you have to try and get rid of them. Also, that microphone buzz is annoying as hell. If you can find a microphone that'll get rid of that, it'll help.

A USB microphone, which you can purchase from gaming stores for use with Rock Band and such games (it's where I got mine) would be a good thing to look into. I find the ones that plug directly into USB ports, the logitech brand ones, have very little microphone buzz and pick up sound a lot better, which would get rid of some of the distortion when you sing louder.

You have an awesome voice and you're a good songwriter so I look forward to hearing more of your songs :)
djdaddio
djdaddio 11th Sep 2010 14:03 - 14 years ago
nice mellow track and a very good effort with the vocals, the only one little niggle and its only a personal thing, i was always waiting for a tempo change or an uplifting part to the song but it didnt come! but its still a nice piece best wishes always D. :0)
kerry
kerry replied Unknown
thank you for takeing your take time to lissin to my song i will be putting some upbeat songs on soon :)
ChrissG
ChrissG 11th Sep 2010 14:00 - 14 years ago
nice track here.. my only constructive ould be not to shy away from effects on your voice.. to give it a cool eerie edge.. and the vocals could do with a bit more by the way of eq'in.. However this is a beautiful song nice acoustic and very good voice.. well done
kerry
kerry replied Unknown
thank your for your comment i will take your advice i know im shy with my voice a bit but but i will be working on it :)

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