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31st Mar 2008 10:18 - 16 years ago
Description : Okay THIRD attempt to upload this one. I spent a lot of time on this track, it started with a Breakbeat Paradise Nu Jazz drum sample (#5 to be exact) and then I built it from there. I used a lot of OS drum sounds and snare rolls to get it the way I wanted it... then added my synths via vsti. lol I don't think I've ever gone back to a track so many times.... finally happy with it... I think ;) If anyone wants a copy let me know, I'm just disabling download for the folks who think this is a place to get free music to chop up without telling the people who made it in the first place.
Presumptious of me to assume anyone would want a copy eh? lol Fingers crossed it actually uploads this time!

Comments (21)

If you have time take a listen and give fiery some feedback.

Spivkurl
Spivkurl 27th May 2009 16:55 - 15 years ago
Great pop sensabilities on this track. Excellent vocals... really top notch. Kind of dark subject matter, but I like it. I do like the glitchiness of the beat, it makes this stand out as not just a pop song. Nice work! Thanks for sharing!
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Yeah the glitchiness was the thing that attracted me to the drum sample... and then once I started playing with them a melody came to mind and the rest went from there. Thanks for listening, glad you liked it :) Lisa
toddj
toddj 27th May 2009 05:14 - 15 years ago
Great experiment. I think you succeeded. The drums sounded a bit glitchey, but that's okay. It's what you were going for. I like how you gliched up your vocal a bit. The synth pads there towards the end of the song totally blew me away. Nicely done! The words really ring true in this song. Keep it up.

Cheers,
Toddj
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
This was a lot of work because it took me forever to be happy with it. I kept going back, adding stuff, taking stuff away.. then was ages doing the vocal mixing too lol. Glad you liked it :)

Lisa
n0mad23
n0mad23 26th May 2009 23:36 - 15 years ago
I was really thrown by the percussion timing at first - BUT when your voice comes in everything changes. I find I actually really like that hesitation in the rhythm! Isn't there a Chinese tradition where an imperfection is deliberately added into art? I'd say this was an incredibly successful experiment.
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
hehe... I don't know about the Chinese tradition but I know that when I heard that beat I really loved it and it was what fired me up to write this.. so even if everyone else hated it I'd still be happy with it ;) Thanks for listening and for appreciating my weirdness ;)
MEDICALMARIJUANA
MEDICALMARIJUANA 16th May 2009 05:35 - 15 years ago
Hello Firey, loved the song. Experimenting is fun, especially when it comes out like this. I just joined the loop a couple of months ago..and so I am looking forward to hearing your new tracks. Vocals were original and catchy..... Welcome back
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Thanks very much for listening, glad you liked it :)
beanut
beanut 9th May 2009 03:08 - 15 years ago
I'm so irritated with the truth; people lie when its more convienient and i understand that;;;;;;but i wont! It is obvious that the u used a less than perfect beat with off timing that killed your production. It was ok, coulda been amazing but u settled 4 less. This is the same type of review i just gave to an unfortuante producer who setteled 4 a half asss outcome...Dont get all excited cuzz i do the same thing,,,,we all do. Its in our nature to settle 4 a less than adequate self portrait!!!!Just learn to not make a habbit of it....K..
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Ummm... dude, I hate to break it to you but I am not going to freak out on you. If that's what you want it's not what you'll get. Guess what? This is like the 6th song I've done without help from anyone AND it was experimental. When you experiment with tracks it tends to make them less than perfect... and to be honest "perfect" is different by each person's standards. I am happy with this, simply because it worked for me at the time. The beat was a sample, and I wanted the glitch that was in it in the song. If you don't like it, fine. That's your opinion. This was simply an experiment and another step in learning to use a program, so please get your bloody panties out of a bunch? You were more upset by this review than I was lol.
DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO
DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO 10th Jan 2009 15:39 - 15 years ago
Really nice track, iz it u doing vocals?
just one bit ov constructive critisizm, your drum loop iz a few millisecs short, just lengthen it a fraction or just knock the tempo up one, ull see a big difference...
peace, Ruffless...
RonGallagher
RonGallagher 14th Aug 2008 15:14 - 16 years ago
Beautiful arrangement.
Obvious time investment.
Engineering, production, first rate.
Gorgeous vocal.
Great song.
Quality work.
Way way impressed.........
5 Stars *****
Voltage
ToxicVoltage
ToxicVoltage 7th Aug 2008 07:26 - 16 years ago
I love your voice and this song is very moving
:-)
-bri
WhiteSands
WhiteSands 20th Jul 2008 04:51 - 16 years ago
love your voice. excellent job on the beat. Beautiful.
Shimun
Shimun 13th Jul 2008 14:44 - 16 years ago
Your voice is beautiful, reminds me Candice from Blackmore's night.
profita
profita 10th Jun 2008 10:23 - 16 years ago
i love ur voice. i can totally hear that behind some nice trancey tracks. keep it up.

profita
helven
helven 9th May 2008 04:12 - 16 years ago
I like the version you sent me and this was just in the featured box so i decided to check how you have progressed and to my surprise it was awsome!
i absolutely love this track and you can tell you have spent alot of time on this

Great job
sorry for not being in touch the past few weeks,, im getting back on track now :D
Salkizar
Salkizar 8th May 2008 12:42 - 16 years ago
This song really moved me. If i was makin a movie i'd definintely want this song in it...Brings to mind the movie Vanilla sky, I think this song would have fitted beautifully in that movie. Congrats on being engaged to a bloke from scotland!! I'm scottish too...We are sexy!!!!
TraXnCtrl
TraXnCtrl 16th Apr 2008 23:45 - 16 years ago
very moving song..............it shows that because you are a singer/ songwriter, there is a lot of feeling there
SLAPJOHNSON
SLAPJOHNSON 3rd Apr 2008 19:52 - 16 years ago
Well it's been a while since I dropped by and listened to your tracks, hey guess what! It just gets better. This is a great track, you said yourself you put a lot in and your getting a lot out of it also, I know I am listening. my advice is just keep doing what you're doing it sounds mighty fine lady! Oh by the way, you must have a pretty big folder of pics now, I like the new one! Is this a monthly thing? Cheers Slap...
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Haha yeah I actually have a penchant for messing with my face... I do a lot of photo manipulations etc, also turning my face into weird graphic art (that's what the last one was). You can blame the fact that I am stuck hiding in my room too much when I'm watching my roommate's son. He's autistic and has home teachers.. and they expect me to hide away and not make noise.. but still be on call. Kinda kills music making during the day so I turn to graphic stuff lol. If people would let me take their pics I'd be playing with their faces instead... alas no volunteers ;)

I'm glad the work I put into this track shows.. Once I got started I needed to get it done before I could move onto something else. Thanks for listening! ~Lisa
ReignStorms
ReignStorms 2nd Apr 2008 16:51 - 16 years ago
Just hopped on the site and there was your song. I must say that you have a beautiful voice. I would like to add vocals to my music too. What do you use, b/c it sounds great!
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Hey thanks very much :) I use Adobe Audition to do my vocal recording and mixing and Acid Pro to do the music. Seems to work well... even if it's a bit fidgety at times :) Thanks for listening!
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass 1st Apr 2008 15:43 - 16 years ago
Big depth happening...fathoms of it!......I swear your voice is sounding better(if that's possible)....a great piece of work,the time signature is different from your normal approach,I really like this aspect of the song as it shows your versatility........great!....cheers planet
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Hehe, my voice is a funny thing at times... my range is fairly wide, but I find that certain sections of my voice (at least to my ears) seem to sound better. Hard thing is not all melodies use the parts of my range I actually like lmao. Thanks for listening, glad you liked it :)
RED1966
RED1966 1st Apr 2008 15:09 - 16 years ago
be careful what you wish for......... its like praying for patience ,before you know it your in a situation where you have to use it
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Yep, exactly. My ex spend 13 years wanting me to change... and when I did he was mad he didn't get to benefit *those were his words*. Thanks for listening :) ~Lisa
ultrabase
ultrabase 1st Apr 2008 09:40 - 16 years ago
your voice is the best thing about this track,the rest fades away due to your awsome voice.don't get me wrong you done a good job on the instruments,but it aint as good as your vocal work.
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Hehe it's good to know I didn't screw up the music part. I'll never claim to be a dj, I am first and foremost a singer/songwriter, and honestly if I had a band to work with I'd be one happy camper. Since it's just me flying solo, electronic works for me. I appreciate the nice compliment, it's nice to know that even though I really don't like my voice, others do lol.
Astrobouncer
Astrobouncer 31st Mar 2008 19:05 - 16 years ago
I think the drums fit the song well. I like the song but your voice is definately amazing and I would like a copy too if you dont mind! Great job!
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Heya thanks very much for listening, glad you liked it enough to want a copy. I'll send you a link to nab it off :) ~Lisa
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 31st Mar 2008 11:48 - 16 years ago
Your voice is beautiful. The song is beautiful. I would very much like a copy. Your work paid off.

11/10

John59
fiery
fiery replied Unknown
Hehe I am uploading it to box.net now, I'll send you a link to nab it from in a few. Thanks for listening, glad you liked it :)

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